Chapter One(part two)

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"Louis." Harry said, simply after one glimpse of the picture.

"Me?" Louis asked.

I nodded.

"Prove it. Where and when we're you born? Specific time and everything." Lou said.

"24th of December 1991. The Doncaster Royal Infermary at 13:52." I said, crossing my arms.

"Mate." Liam said, "That's on Wiki."

(A/N: I don't know the exact time Louis was born, just go with the fact that him and Brandi are twins. Thanks.)

Louis starred at me, "There has to be some other way to convince me."

"You called me Bambi. When we were in kindergarten, you tried to write my name but misspelled it so bad that it looked like Bambi." I said.

He looked up at me wide-eyed, "Brandi!"

I nodded.

He tackled me into a hugged, "Sorry for slamming you to the ground."

I laughed, "It's okay."

"So how did you find me? I didn't know I had another sister." he said.

"Well, I found that picture, then confronted my stepmum, then my dad." I said. "He told me I had a brother, but wouldn't tell me your name. He said your mum changed it."

"Yeah, I was born Louis Troy Austin, but mum changed it to Louis William Tomlinson." he said.

"Well, that's just great. You two can catch up in the morning. I'm going back to bed." Liam said, leaving.

"He'a grouchy when he's sleepy." Niall whispered quietly.

"I heard that!" Liam said.

"See?" Niall laughed.

I laughed.

"Well, you must be tired. Tomorrow you can explain how you got on the bus?" Louis said.

I nodded.

"Okay. You can sleep on the extra bunk." he said, throwing the extra pillows and blankets into the floor then climbing into the bunk above me. Harry climbed in above him, and Niall climbed into the top one on the other side.

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Okay, guys!!! So, here's a REALLY short update :/  I didn't realize how short it was until I uploaded it...SO since I'm staying at a friend's house tonight and will have internet access ALL night long.  I'll post Chapter Two later IF I get ONE comment!  Just ONE! That's all I'm asking for, not so hard is it?  AND if you are the person who comments, Chapter Two will be dedicated to YOU!  And the comment can't just be 'hey, love the story'  I'd like for you to maybe tell me why you love it?  Or some quote in the story that just made you laugh?  I promise it will get better later, all stories have the beginning that kind of sets the story up.  So please bear with me. 

P.S. Here's a little sneak peak of Chapter Two:

Brandi's P.O.V.

"It's Louis Tomlinson from One Direction!" someone yelled once inside the airport.

"Run!" Louis said, taking off into a sprint and pulling me with him. We ran from the fans for about fifteen minutes, then Louis pulled me into an abandoned room and we listened as the fans ran by screaming.

I panted, "That was awesome."

"Awesome? Liam will chew our heads off because I didn't call for security as soon as I saw all the reporters." Louis said.

"I'll protect you from mean ole Liam." I said, trying not to laugh.

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Okay, so remember.  Just ONE comment.  And I'm sorry Bob, it doesn't count if it comes from you :)

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