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Mystery results

Here are your results! Please be noted that there is a case of foul play and be prepared to witness some alterations in these results. Winners will not be affected

The girl behind everyone's Smile

By 120khushmita

Spelling/grammar/vocab/punctuation: 7

Content/plot/flow: 10

Blurb/description: 7

Character development/protagonist/antagonist: 10

Cover/title/overall cover impression: 7

Review: This story has the same issues as its counterpart in this category, The untold story. The writing has a lot of errors and formatting issues, making it hard to read and understand, unfortunately. The characters mostly just talk, without much backstory or descriptions or characterizations. There is a lot of fun going into the story, but it needs some work to map out the structure and flesh out the characters more.

Total: 41

The untold story

By khush_00

Spelling/grammar/vocab/punctuation: 7

Content/plot/flow: 10

Blurb/description: 16

Character development/protagonist/antagonist: 10

Cover/title/overall cover impression: 13

Review: This story might not belong in the mystery category, as there isn't much of a mystery. Instead, it's more of a fun teen story. The writing is really challenging to read and badly formatted. The characters seem funny as do their antics, but it's hard to believe they are in college as they seem to act like children. Overall, the story needs a clearer plot, more character development, and some proofreading to really help it meet its potential. With some work, it could get there.

Total: 56

Guns And Roses

By Starshadow385

Spelling/grammar/vocab/punctuation: 14

Content/plot/flow: 13

Blurb/description: 14

Character development/protagonist/antagonist: 13

Cover/title/overall cover impression: 18

Review: The main character is really likeable and relatable. But the plot and premise of the story is too confusing and doesn't do enough to explain or set up what is going on. The world and the characters need to be established better for the premise to make sense. Why is this boy telling the protagonist about a murder? What can she do about it? What do they mean to each other?

Total: 72

He Broke Me

By Emilia1239000

Spelling/grammar/vocab/punctuation: 15

Content/plot/flow: 14

Blurb/description: 14

Character development/protagonist/antagonist: 14

Cover/title/overall cover impression: 17

Review: This story has a lot of romance and heartbreak. The POV switches don't quite work, as it gives a lot away and starts to repeat scenes to show them from both perspectives. However, the intrigue of wondering how the main character is at fault for the terrible things that have happened is enough to keep readers reading, wanting to solve the mystery.