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Name: StarwatcherCommon, but a nice name :) 7/10
Tribe: Nightwing
Not bad

Gender FemaleLooks: Dark gray with swirls of flashy silver on her face and wings. Has black eyes.Simple, but she seems to be a pretty dragon. 9/10
Personality: She's very snobbish, but she has a soft spot for dragonets. She also has a dark sense of humor, and doesn't get along great with anyone.I think this personality is a bit uncommon, but doesn't everybody have a soft spot for dragonets? :D 10/10
Family: Twilightseer, her father, and Moonclaw, her mother.All her family members, if she doesn't have siblings. Also, very unique names. 10/10
Powers: Foreseeing the futureOverused but understandable.
Backstory: She was born on the valcanic island, under the rule of Queen Battlewinner, (i believe) and got moved to the rainforest whilst she was very young. When she was a little older, King Darkstalker showed up, but she refused to follow. She foresaw him coming, and asked her parents to hide her. She currently lives in the rainforest, going about her casual life. However, her parents now live under the rule of King Darkstalker. It's a nice story, and I can understand the plot. I understand why you used the foreseeing, though :) 9/10
Other: She was Animus-touched
Common, but it's a nice power :3. What do you mean by 'was'? 8/10


<3 Overall, I give Starwatcher a  97/100. She's a good character and has a lot of good stuff about her. The only advice I may give is not using such common powers for nightwings/other dragons that other people use for their nightwing oc's. But, other than that, she's a really good character! (P.s. you can keep the foresight and animus thing i'm just saying) Have a good day! <3


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