THE PERFECT REJECTION

Part 1- First Impressions

Author’s Note: Hi Readers! As you see, I have a different style of writing. I do have the 3rd person who’s narrating the story.Instead na yung mga characters lang yung nagnanarrate using their POV’s.  Unlike other stories, I prefer this kind of writing kasi I think; mas maeexpress ko yung mga emotions at mas maiintidihan kahit young reader. Well basta, I enjoy writing this way.  Of course, there are some typo and grammar errors here, please do understand!

"Pinakamahirap na part sa pagiging student ang maging so called “freshman” , andyan lahat ng fears mo.Like , being familiar with the campus, paano ba magkaroon ng cool friends. At siyempre pinangako ko rin namang maging well known and popular sa school. By the way I am Yuri Laine Villano, your pretty girl crush blogger (oo self-proclaimed..haha) and I want to share to you my life here in Seamas-Stewart College Academy .A.K.A your official narrator here in the story, so please bear with my kadaldalan OK? (wink)”- *ini off ang camera*

“ Yuri ano ba nasa hallway palang tayo?(nagtatakip ng mukha sa kahihiyan) “sabi ni Yanie

*Siya naman si Zayn Ilyanie Marquez, how should I describe her? Well, she’s my super duper ultimate bestfriend in earth. Just like me she’s from a well off family but her dad’s company went bankrupt last year, kaya for sure she’s having a hard time hanggang ngayon. Yung nakasanayan nyang buhay noon, ah basta hanga ako kay Yanie kasi she’s very strong. She support her studies by having part time jobs at yung mom niya is working abroad to support her at yung younger brother niya. Enough for the introduction, hanapin muna namin yung classroom* -------

“Room 205, na to di ba?”tanong ni Yanie
“Tara na sa loob.”aya ni Yuri
*Lumapit sa kanila ang isang babae*
“Hello, I’m Kendra. “nakangiting pakilala nito
“Hi, I’m Yuri and this is Yanie.”pakilala nito
“Napaaga yata tayo no? Wala pang half yung tao.”sabi ni Yanie
*Lumapit ang isang lalaki*
“Liam?”sabay na sabi ni Yanie at Yuri(shocked)

*Liam was the most popular guy in middle school*

“Yanie and Yuri Right?”nakangiting bati nito
“I thought you studied abroad?”pacute na sabi ni Yuri
*Siniko naman siya ni Yanie with the mahiya-ka-naman-look*

*After a while ay napuno na rin ang classroom at dumating na rin ang teacher nilang si Mr. Bagon. *

“Welcome freshmen, I hope you enjoy your stay here in the academy. I am Mr. Bagon and I will be your Math teacher, in this semester.”pakilala nito

*Biglang bumukas ang pinto at dumungaw ang isang lalaking nakacap, at may hawak na isang metal scrap sa kaliwang kamay kaya ikinagulat ito ng marami.*

“Excuse me?”sabi ni Mr. Bagon
“I’m sorry po, I’m late.”sabi ng unknown guy
“Why do you have that in you?”pagtataka ng guro
“Ahhhh, I’m sorry po ulit. Nasira kasi yung bicycle ko at I used this to fix it.”paliwanag nito
“Could you please remove your cap, we’re inside the classroom” utos ng guro

“Halos lahat kami natakot when he arrived. His voice sounds mysterious. His presence sounds mysterious. But when he took off his cap, it was a whole new world!
He was stunning. “ Yuri

“Never pa ko nakakita ng ganoon ka good looking na tao in my life. He was shining with those cheap shirt”----Kendra

“What a reaction! Enough for that, please introduce yourself. I know that all the girls here are dying to know your name.” --Sir Bagon

“Hi everyone (smiles showing his one deep dimple)!”

*Crowd reacts* I am Keshi Ashton Monteverde. Nice to meet you all.” Pakilala nito

“Please sit beside Ms. Marquez, yun an lang yung vacant seat.”utos ng guro
“ I’ll just sit at the back.”sabi ni Keshi

“I expected this kind of reaction and I hated it”--Keshi in his mind

(After the class………………………….)
“Yanie!! Grabe, as in I can’t breathe.”kilig na sabi mi Yuri
“ Oo na, alam ko na yang sasabihin mo May bago ka ng gusto, na mas higit pa sa mga Korean Oppa che che mo yun di ba?”inis na sabi ni Yanie
“Basher ka talaga, oo nay un nga yung sasabihin ko.”asar na sabi ni Yuri
“By the way, anong oras ng last subject natin?” tanong ni Yanie
“2:30 dito sa skedyul natin”tugon ni Yuri
“ Tara gala naman tayo, treat ko.”aya ni Yuri
“Hoy Yuri, di ba alam mong may trabaho ako diba?”tgon ni Yanie
“Naman eh!”nakasimangot na sabi nito.

"Another beautiful creature. "-- Yanie