Once Upon A Faction....

Nope , Typo.

Four POV:
It isn't okay. I've avoided tris like the plague. It was so sudden. I just don't understand.
Tris POV:
It's been 17 days since the hand holding incident. I think I've come to the conclusion that he's given up. I'm too much baggage. As Ruby pulls on my flowy polka dress I realised I should stop throwing myself a pity party and start being productive Ruby has been really close to me lately. I love her more than I love four over the last few weeks. That's really bad.
" hi rubs! Are you alright sweetheart?"
" yeah. I'm okay. How are you. I got told you are four were fighting."
" my little man told you right?"

" maybe!!"
" cheeky thing. Yeah just some issues. Well I would like to talk to you. "
I pulled Ruby onto her single bed. Sitting her down with grace. She's beautiful, she's like my little sister.
" now what's going on rubs?"
" huh?"
" you said you needed help."
"It's n-nothing. I promise."
" remember I'm always here sweetheart!"
Just like that. I left. I don't know why. But who needs me here? Ruby has to try herself and my beloved Four has clearly given up. I have to run. As I sprint, all I know is that I have tears streaming, mascara running. I texted four.
' I need some time. See you when I see you.'
I shut my phone off , I can't be bothered to deal with a reply. He just can't fight , he's a ' dauntless' but this whole fighting thing , he doesn't understand it. I'm too hard , so he's giving up. Slowly , but I can see it. I can see that in his eyes he's not attracted to me. He doesn't say I'm beautiful or hold my hand or even kiss me :(. He just doesn't care. Why can't he care?
I realise that I still am crying , I'm in pain , not the physical kind , my mind hurts. It's agony truly. Why am I so shy ever since I came to this new school. Why has four made me shy?! What's it him , I think it was. I turn my phone back on to see if he actually does care. Two messages. Wow! Maybe it's possible. Maybe I have hope. Maybe just maybe he loves me. We are so perfect together.
' oky'
' oops typo. Okay'
Okay , just okay?!flipping okay I tell the guy I need time from him and I get a darn response of a typo okay!! I didn't even have the time spent on me to double check the text. Nope , typo.
A/N:
Sorry I've been so bad with updating , but life gets hectic and high school gets in the way. Do any of you even like this book? It's not what I'm used to writing , and I don't really love it. Please , please more comments. Positive or negative ( as long as it's constructive criticism ) no hate please. Should I write a new story? What do you guys think... I'll be active more.....IF I get some comments and feedback.