Snow

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I only spent about five minutes on this so it's not great but I would appreciate some reviews because I am trying to improve my poem-writing skills <3 This is just a little poem about winter so enjoy!

Snowflakes fall from the sky

One lands on my nose

It feels like a dot of cold

Then starts to melt

More come

Faster and faster

Wind swirls around me

Snow flies up

It feels like a giant marshmallow

But acts like a ball pit

I feel myself sinking into it as I walk

My hands start to turn numb

I wish I had brought gloves

It's time to go

It's a winter wonderland outside

Hot chocolate is like a warm shock

My fingers start to unfreeze

I pick up a book and read

It starts with

Snowflakes fall from the sky

- writesthetic

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