Making a Wish (Louis FanFic)[On Hold](Under Construction)

Chapter 4

Gonna try to make this chapter good lol

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When we arrived at a huge brick house, the boys and Paul helped us unload our luggage. It would be pointless to describe every single detail of the house, seeing as you probably know what a house looks like.

I asked the boys, "Whose house is this?"

Louis opened the front door slowly. "This is my house," Louis said proudly.

Walking in, I could tell this was Louis' house. Part of it was because the walls and ceiling were red, Louis' favorite color. But a huge majority of my suspicions were due to the large amount of garbage on the floor, table, and counter.  

"Louis, can't you clean up a bit?" I asked Louis.

"Why would I do that?" Louis asked me.

I rolled my eyes at his stupidity. "Oh, I don't know, maybe because you have guests over?"

Louis pretended to be thinking for a moment. "You mean you, my sister and Eleanor? You're not guests, you're maids. Why do you think I brought you guys here? Because you are my friends or something?" Louis said jokingly.

"You're right. What on Earth were we thinking?" I said, letting him win.

"Come on, let me show you to your rooms," Louis told us, leading us down a hallway. 

There were fours doors, two on each wall. There was also a door at the end of the hall. Louis pointed to the first door on the left, "This is your room Eleanor, across from you is Bridget." Louis led me a bit farther down the hall. "This is my room and across from me is you, Miss strawberry."

"Again with the strawberry?" I asked Louis.

"You know it," Louis confirmed winking at me. I felt my heart rate pick up. Even though I knew it was only in a best friend way, I couldn't help but feel flustered. I opened the door to my room. I nearly gasped when I saw the size of it. It had to be at least twice as big as my own room. Stratch that, it was more than three times my room. The bed was queen sized and there was a beautiful dresser on the opposite wall. On the wall adjacent to it, there were two doors. I opened one of the doors to find a bathroom. I opened the other one and nearly fainted.

You know those fantasies you have when you wish that you could have a huge walk in closet that made you feel like a princess when you walked in? I had that fantasy too. I think it just came true. I officially loved Louis more, if that's possible. He gave me a walk-in closet. Louis is so freaking amazing. I don't even have enough clothes to fill this closet.

"Like your room?" I heard a voice behind me. I turned around to see Louis casually leaning against the doorframe. I think I just fell deeper in love. You see, that's the problem with Louis, the little things he does makes me want to go insane. He's just standing there, for god's sake, and I'm drooling!

"Yeah I really like it. The closet's a bit big, don't you think? I'm only staying a month, I don't have much clothes," I told Louis honestly.

"Don't worry, I'll take you shopping," Louis said, walking closer to me.

"You're too good to me Louis." I said smiling at him.

"I want to talk to you about something," Louis said, quickly changing the subject. I could hear the tone change in his voice, and the atmosphere changed from a light, happy mood to a serious one.

"Yeah?" I asked him.

"It's actually the reason I arranged this whole trip." Louis said.

He took my hand.

"Tori, I-"

Bridget bursted through the door. "Hey we're going to- what are you doing?" Bridget asked us.

Realizing how close we still were, Louis and I separated quickly.

"We're going to Nando's. Get ready." Bridget said and walked away quickly.

I really need to talk to Bridget about ruining my moments with Louis.

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Ugh, I so wish I could make this chapter longer and better but my sister is begging for the iPad.

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Btw guys, I'm going to start writing a fanfic with my friend Saarah, and its going to be on the account monkeysandcake, I'll keep u updated on that :)