Halis: School of Wings

The New Boy's Ideas

MOONWIND POV

I was laying in my bed last night, and I thought of a story Idea that.. Well.. Could be worked upon. It's about four creatures(I don't know what they would look like yet) trying to find a crystal ball in order to restore their species (which they can't do themselves, since they don't have the parts for it)

But now, I was sitting in my desk in history class, excited for the potential of this story, hoping it wouldn't be a flop, like every other one. Suddenly, the door crashed open,

"I'M SO, SO SORRY!! I KNOW, I'M LATE, PLEASE DON'T THINK I'M ALWAYS LIKE THIS!!"

The teacher jumped a bit in shock, then calming down, "don't worry, Ajax, just find a seat." People snickered, and after that the room got louder again.

There was a seat open next to me where he sat down, immediately, I noticed his wings; not only did he have one of the most rarest, but he had MULTIPLE PAIRS!!! I was shocked, I've never seen that before! He looked at me with red irises, breathing heavily, "heh... Hello!" He also had a british accent.
"Hey. . Ajax? That's a cool name! Mine's long and stupid, MoonWind." I answered. "Man, we haven't had a new kid since.. Ever! Umm.. Here's some advice for the remainder of high school; stay away from Leena, If she pulls you into her 'popular kids group', there ain't no fishing you out!"
He chuckled, "ok then"

"Hey, wanna chat more at lunch?"

" Sure! Can you tell me who I can trust though? Like.. Your friends? "

"Alrightie then, there's me, Persis, Tulip, Iris, and then her, she kinda doesn't really like us that much, though" I said, pointing at Vixon. "What's her name?" He asked. " Oh, yeah, sorry, her name's Vixon. "

"Why doesn't she like you?"

" I dunno, something about her not having wings, she basically just never talks to us, only Tulip. "

Ajax stared at her "huh.. I bet I could change that!" He stated, walking over to Vixon.
I smiled deviously as I watched him pull up a chair and talk to her. There's no way he can succeed in this.

VIXON POV

I saw that new boy walk over to me, I narrowed my eyes. "Hello! I'm Ajax, nice to meet you!"
" what do you want? You want to rub it in my face? "

He seemed genuinely confused, "rub what in your face?"
" you know what I'm talking about. The fact that you have multiple wings and I have none, the 'classic pair', I know all of the tricks. " I answered coldly. "No! I'm just trying to be nice,"
" Ugh.. It's so obviously fake.. " I mumbled, staring at my desk in attempt to finish my assignment. Suddenly, I felt somebody touch my hair, I smacked Ajax's hand away. "What the hell!?" I yelled. " Oww... Sorry, it's really soft.. " he said, rubbing his hand. I looked at him, confused. I couldn't help but smile a bit. He glanced up and chuckled, "that's a good start! At lunch, I'll be waiting!" Ajax stood up, walking away. I didn't plan on showing up. I finished my assignment, smiling for the first time in a long time.

MOONWIND POV (again, sorry)

At lunch...

"Ok, so I have the story that I made up, wanna help me Critique it?" I asked.
" Sure! " Ajax said, putting his sketchbook on the bench. "What do the characters look like?" I looked nervously at the ground, "heh.. I don't really have any"  his eyebrows furrowed, "you don't..? Ok then, what's you're storyline?"
I piped up, "it's about fantasy creatures trying to find a crystal ball!"

" Why? "

"So they can restore their endangered species."

"Alright, I can be your idea man. "

LATER...

I soon found out that Ajax was an amazing artist and had great ideas! We really made a great team. In the end, me and him made a story that was full of literally everything, romance, depression, gore, fantasy, and even more! Here's the story so far:

There are three crystal balls, one get rid of their elf-like ears and their skinny tail, the other two get rid of their clothes, and if somebody finds all of then, they get magical powers as well as a new creature gets added to the forest they live in. We don't really have much storyline but we do have characters and we know one of them is gonna die! Ajax really did know really good ideas.

SORRY IT'S SO SHORT.. I'M REALLY INSPIRED TO MAKE THIS STORY NOW! ENCLUDING THE ROMANCE, AND STUFF WITH VIXON :) I FEEL LIKE VIXON IS THE PROTAGONIST, BUT MOONWIND IS THE MAIN CHARACTER, GET WHAT I MEAN?  IT'S A SACRIFICE WE ALL HAVE TO MAKE, I MAKE SHORTER STORIES, I WRITE THE STORIES QUICKER. ALTHOUGH IT PAINS ME, I'LL DEAL WITH IT :)CANT WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER! <3