Tower of God x reader one-shots

Lero ro x reader

In the comic Khun Hachuling in introduced as Khun Hatzling, but I'll be using Hachuling. Just saying to avoid any confusion. 

I tried putting some more dialogue into this one. I'm trying to improve on that, please give me your thoughts on it. Tips & Tops plz. 

Key: 
(Y/n) = your name 
(L/n) = last name
(F/n) = friend name 

I'd say the reader is probably a light bearer in this one-shot, but I won't specify the position, so you can decide for yourself. 

One of Hachuling's game computers was acting up. An old teammate and still a friend of yours was called in to fix it. You decided to tag along because you didn't have anything better to do with your life. 
Also, you could read an write some game programming languages (C++, Javascript, HTML5, CSS3, C#, Java & SQL)*. Sometimes you tagged along as a second opinion or as the second programmer or took on the job of data-analyst. 

When you and (F/n) arrived at the KhunKhun Game center in the middle of nowhere, Hachuling was already waiting for you. "Hey! (F/n), I'm glad you're here. I see you brought fireworks too." He greeted you. "I have a name." You commented. "Nah, I like fireworks better," Hachuling said. (F/n) snickered. "Let's see that broken machine of yours." They said. "Yeah, right this way," Hachuling said. 

"Yeah, that looks pretty broken." You said as you saw the flickering screen of the game machine. "There are no irregularities with the machine itself, so the problem is probably in the wireworks or mainframe*. Where do all your wires connect?" (F/n) asked. "Right there." Hachuling lead you to a hatch that lead to a small room. 

You all entered the small room. Let's just say it was... cozy. 
(F/n) connected their computer to the mainframe so you could check the code for any irregularities, while they checked the wireworks. "I can't find any irregularities in the code, do you think it could be a zombie* type virus?" You asked (F/n). "Could be, I'll connect the virus scanner." (F/n) said. he struggled with the old USB gate. Which side is up and which side is down?

You heard the door of the game center open and two pairs of footsteps entered. Hachuling and (F/n) also noticed. Hachuling went to greet his "guests", or most likely people who wandered in here because this place was sketchy as fuck. You sweatdropped as he fell back into the hatch. While you wondered why the hell these people were even here, (F/n) was still struggling with the old USB gates Hachuling's machines had. "This shitty USB-cable won't fit no matter which side I put up." (F/n) complained. 

When (F/n) managed to plug in the USB cable you were able to complete the virus scan. Then you rebooted the entire system. "Why are all the systems down!?" Hachuling asked. "Because we're rebooting the entire system!" (F/n) yelled back. "Why?" Hachuling asked into the hatch. "Because you want us to fix your machine." You said. 

Not long after that, the mainframe was back online. "Ok, it should work now." You said. "Hey Blueberry!" (F/n) yelled. "Yeah!" He yelled back. " 'S' everything working up there!?" (F/n) asked. "Yup!" Hachuling responded. 

You and (F/n) dragged yourselves out of the hatch. The lights seemed bright and the temperature high*. Two other men were in the game center you hadn't seen before. One blonde with yellow eyes and one redhead with red eyes. If you included Hachuling, they were like the primary color trio. The redhead's red suited him, he was a hothead alright, and an idiot for playing so many games against Hachuling. The blonde, however, seemed to have a brain, because he was slowly hacking through the security. You'd do something about it if (F/n) didn't distract you.