A Promise

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(I normally don't do this but I had to rewrite this chapter to make this story work. Thank you so much for your patients and be safe out there guys.)

Elsa had enough of listening to this creature. She started running on top of the water freezing some parts as she goes. If she was the only person with powers...then so be it! She needed to take him out and fast "Hollow your mine!"

As she was running...she didn't expect a large wave to come out of nowhere and knock her out...

Everyone on the beach watched in horror, hoping the young white haired woman would come out of the ocean for breath, and thankfully she did.

"What....where did that come from??" she said confused and looking around.

"Elsa!! LOOK OUT!!" Jack shouted still on the beach.

Another giant wave came from out of nowhere and it made Elsa go back under the water. Everyone felt so helpless when watching their friend fight. They had no power and no strength to go even close to the water.

Hollow began to laugh "This is just getting too exciting!" and could no longer hold back as he flew towards Elsa. Before Hollow could do anything Maui had already shape-shifted into a hawk and was close to bringing him down...but again this wave, even bigger than before slapped Maui into the ocean.

Elsa was now struggling to breath underwater. She used her power to freeze large parts but when she felt like she had an advantage another wave would come out of nowhere and strike her down. Maui tried looking for her and when they reached out towards each other a whirl pool formed and split them apart.

Jack had a bad feeling about this and started to walk towards the ocean. As he did something started to bubble in the short distance. A figure began emerge from there, a girls figure. Her hair was long, dark, and wavy....

"Is that?..."

Hollow had a giant grin on his face "Moana, you finally show yourself." He began laughing out of excitement.

Jack was now closer to the girl and saw sadness in her eyes. She was still the Moana he knew before.

"I'm so sorry Jack..." she said only for him to hear.

Jack didn't know what to say to his friend...his feet just started running towards her. "Moana!"

She watched him get even more closer with his hand out for her to grab. She put hers out as well but it was no use...

Hollow held up the necklace containing the heart. He brought it up to his lips and whispered a command that caused Moana to stop and turn the opposite direction of Jack.

"Remember girl I want her alive."

Moana nodded and raised her hand, commanding the whirlpool to disburse. Elsa was found floating unconscious on top of the water and Hollow hovered right above her.

"Don't touch Elsa!" Shout Maui on top of a rock.

"Demi God Maui...Moana I leave him in your hands." said Hollow as he picked up the woman and disapeard into the ocean. Moana was now left alone with Maui.

"What happened to you?" Asked Maui not wanting to fight her.

The brown headed girl walked on top of the water like it was solid ground. She looked out towards the group who were still watching and faced back to Maui. "I...I was awaken by Hollow..." Then she she showed her hands which were covered in black and blue veins. "He gave me power I didn't want...I'm just his pawn to control and I can't stop him..."

"What can we do to help you?"

Moana had a look of pain on her face "I want so badly to be saved but honestly...I don't think I can. Hollow is bluffing! He isn't able to kill Pitch! He's planning to use Elsa as the key to break the worlds of mortals and spirits. Elsa is the bridge but I'm not so sure of how he's going to do it...If you want to help me then save Elsa!"

Maui was taken aback by Moana's words. Wasn't there anything else that could be done? "where can we find Elsa?"

"I can't tell you that exactly. Hollow has ears one me but I think if you find Queen Clarion then I think she can help you. Ask about Ahtohallan. However that is if your able to survive me."

Maui was confused on what she meant "Wait what?--"

Tadashi's eyes widen in shock as he saw what happened to the man who saved his life "MAUI!!"

Moana wanted to cry from what she had done, it was a huge risk to take. She used Jacks borrowed powers and Pitches black sand to turn Maui into a solid statue. Jack and the others were horrified and couldn't do anything to reach Maui.

Moana then used the ocean to quickly bring her towards the others. From what Jack saw...Moana didn't look like herself.

"Listen to me! You have no chance! Hollow has right now showed you mercy. Neverland, is the safest and I suggest you all stay here for the rest of your lives if you don't want to be killed. Stay out of our way...Guardians"

As she turned to leave Jack quickly ran in front of her.
"I'm sorry for the way I treated you...please forgive me"

"It's too late for that. Good bye Jack."

"I'll save you Moana. I'll make it all up to you after I save you. I promise."

She secretly shed a tear and then Moana was nowhere to be seen. Her body was turned into clear water and she was gone.

"I promise..."

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