Once the ceremony was over the Dauntless was the first one's out.And when we reached outside everyone started running to the trains.I was a bit fast for a abnegation girl.But I used to it I ran everywhere with Tobias.God I miss him.I wonder if I will get to see him....
Anyway I saw the train and I ran and jumped into it. i accidentally pushed a guy from erudite while I got on and I quickly apologized.
"Sorry."
"Its cool.Im alexander.But people usually call me Alex."
"Mackenzie people usally call me Mackenzie."I smiled lightly.
"No no no that's to long...Im going to call you Zie."
"Zie?"I laughed
"Yeah!"He chuckled.
"Fine by me."
"Yo Alex I can't believe youre talking to a stiff!"A boy yelled.
"Shut up Kyle."He glared.
"Whatever."Alex continued talking to me till I heard someone yell to get ready.I then saw people jumping off.
"Oh my god."I candor girl gasped.
"Now or never."I dauntless born said then jumped.I looked at Alex and I just shrugged and got up.
"Lets jump together?"I offered
"yeah lets do that," Alex said with fear in his eyes.
We were soon the last people on the train and i looked at him.
"1,2,3,GO!"I spoke and we jumped off.I landed on my knees
"Oh my god..."I said speechless.Alex got up and helped me up.
"Thanks."We walked towards were everyone else was.
"Im eric."A guy with a lot of metal on him said.He talked a bit till he asked who was going to jump down the hole first.Everyone stayed quite.I decided to speak up. "I'll jump first."
Eric smirked."Go ahead."I walked to the front of everyone.I stood on the edge.I looked down and closed my eyes and jumped.
I felt a net catch me.I opened my eyes and signed of relif.
I got tugged down to meet the eyes I havent seen in 4 years.
"Tobias."I whispered.
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Eaton's Sister (Divergent story)
Fanfiction4 years of being alone,4 years of torture by my father. The day he left was the death of me. I just want to be like him. I'm going to follow in his footsteps. I'm Mackenzie Eaton Some of the characters in this story I do NOT own. Characters from the...
