Book: The Blue voice
Reviewer: A_book_Lover3456
Author: Sumit512
Criteria:
1. Cover: The book cover is decent but it can be better.
2. Description: Your description is on point it creates ease for the readers to visualize it.
3. Character Development: The character development, in my opinion, I have not seen a lot of it except the situation altering a little more would make them more interesting.
4. Plot development: The plot development is good some things lack fewer details.
5. Grammar: Sentences structure use more active voice than passive and Some tenses need to be fixed and spelling mistakes
6. Punctuation: Put full stop where required.
7. Overall: Overall it's quite interesting and creates curiosity about what will happen next.
8. A brief comment on what to improve.
- Don't make the sentence very complicated keep it simple.
-Show don't tell rule is not being followed you're telling a lot than expected.
-Less usage of character dialogues.
-Break the paragraphs so it looks less crowded on a single page.
-Some things lack details give more information about it.
- Depth editing and polishing are required.
Good luck with your future writing!.
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