Book: A Tinge of Yellow
Author: @BookLoverVenue
Rose: emmiepooh2
Title/Cover/Blurb:
The title sounds soft and perfect for a book of this genre. However, the cover did not explain that word perfectly. It doesn't make any sense to me. With the blurb it doesn't make any sense being you describe the characters separately in first person. It is too busy and long. I recommend for you to fix that.
Hook/Pacing/Plot:
The hook isn't completely established in the story. I'm so confused on what is happening due to lack of details. You didn't show much and when you described the scenes it was all telling. Regardless, the story has a lot of potential. I just recommend for you to go back through and fix what I'm recommending.
Overall Enjoyment:
If I was to stumble upon this book, I would not read it due to how wishy washy it was. The cover, blurb, and hook didn't help me get pulled in at all. I wish you the best in your future endeavors.
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