A Bloody Rose (Doctor Who FanFic)

Donna's Rembrance part 1

I wouldn't let that happen. It couldn't not after everyone else; it had been bad enough as it was. What was he even after? Why did he wish to inflict this much pain. If something happens I her... I pushed the thought to the back of my mind and have one last glance at my physic paper
I think it's time you pay Donna a final visit

I shook my head and raced out of the Tardis as it landed. I would NOT let him-me- no that psychopath take her from me, by after Rose, not after Martha. Donna had to live. I raced into her house and got a few bewildered looks from her parents. I couldn't let her die here. I couldn't put her through that much pain. Regenerating was bad enough as it was; it was like being ripped- no shredded into millions of pieces again and again before being crammed back together into a new form. It was extremely unpleasant and it would be a million times worse for her is she remembered. She would be blown into millions of billions of particles. I slammed the door open and stopped in her room. I froze and surveyed the room. The doctor-no the other me- no that mad man was standing there gripping Donna's shoulder Donna, her hair was pulled back and she was wearing a pair of plain pink pajamas.
"What the bloody hell!" she yelled looking between both of us. I let out a mental sigh in relief knowing she was still okay. There was still hope in saving her.
"You're- you both look the same?!" her eyes widened in shock "You are the same! Who are you?" h narrowed her eyes at me. "Did Molly hire you? Did she put you up to this? I knew it! Shes been tryin' to get be back since I put the hot sauce in her tea!" I sighed; she was still as obnoxious as ever
"Donna you need to leave now" I warned carefully before focusing my gaze on the mad man. What would drive me over the edge his far into doing something like this?
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