Thodi der 1

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The camera pans in, focusing on Shravan as he speaks with a mixture of determination and vulnerability.

Shravan: "Ekk baar keheti rukk jaao toh sau baar ruk jaata."

Suman: (turning away, her voice filled with pain) "Kiss haqq se roku? Woh haqq kaha se lau?"

Shravan: (voice breaking) "Tum hi bolo, kis rishte se rukk jaau..."

(Musical silence fills the room, heightening the tension and emotions. They both stand facing away from each other, back to back.)

Shravan: (voice trembling) "Bachpan ka pyaar juban par aaj bhi nahi aata."

Suman: (almost whispering) "Mai keh nahi sakti aur tumse kaha nahi jaata..."

(They slowly turn to face the camera, emotions raw and visible on their faces. Their eyes meet briefly before they look into the distance.)

Background Dialogue (voiceover): "Dil ki baat batayenge ya juda ho jayenge, jo bane EK DUJE KE VAASTE..."

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SO CONTINUE the story where promo just ends







Both Shravan and Suman, feeling a sudden pang in their hearts, turn around almost simultaneously, moving closer to each other, closing the emotional gap.

Shravan: Ek baar kehti sumo ruk jaao, sau baar ruk jaau tumhare liye.

Suman: (Gazing deeply into his eyes) Kis haqq se roku mai Shravan aur woh haqq kaha se lau?

Shravan: Please say that you want me to stay here, and I will stay.

Suman: (Tears welling up in her eyes) Shravan... (Her voice breaks as she starts to cry)

Shravan: (Gently wiping her tears) Sumo, please don't cry. Okay, okay, I'm not going anywhere.

Suman: (Nods and wipes her own tears, then hugs him tightly, her body trembling with emotion)

Shravan: Toh rok lo na, Sumo... Mat jaane do... Koi toh reason batao mujhe yaha rokne kaa...



Suman: Mr. Shravan Malhotra, you want a reason to stay here, right?

Shravan: (Nods in agreement)

Suman: Toh listen, this best friend of yours had stopped living life after you left. And when you came back, I started living again.

Shravan: (Stares at her in pain)

Suman: This only best friend is surviving because she knows there is someone who loves her as a man loves a woman.

They both stare at each other for a long time, maybe a minute or an hour, as if finding answers in each other's eyes.

Background Music: Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori, sufi iska rang haaye... Isme jo tera khwaab piroya, neende bani patang...

Suman: I started living again, Shravan, when you came back. Only three things I wanted to do then and now...

Shravan: (In a daze) Kya Sumo?

They start their staring game again, their eyes speaking volumes.

Background Music: Dil bharta nahi, aankhe rajjti nahi, chahe kitna bhi dekhti jaau... Waqt jaaye main rok na paau... Tu thodi der aur theher ja soneya, tu thodi der aur theher jaa... Tu thodi der aur theher ja zaalima, tu thori der aur theher jaa...

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