✨Romance Results✨

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The wait is over, here are the results!
Yes, finally!!

First of all, thanks to the amazing Judges!
(seriously, they both are amazing and hardworking!)

sakina_moiz and KeiraKnox1

Thank you everyone for waiting patiently for the results, but not anymore!

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Third place  with a score of 83/100 goes to...

Marrying a lie by -laeunoia

Review:

I like the title. It relates to the story and description. Speaking of description, you have a few punctuational errors in your description, but it’s good as far as describing your book. The cover is simple but really matches the theme, although I think it should be more secret-y.

You have really good grammar skills and your characters are really well-developed. Although I'd like to feel more jealous and angry emotion comic from the main character. Don't be afraid to show her feelings. We don't always have to like a main character, we just have to care.

Your chapters seem to be taken very good care of proofreading-wise. I'm glad you've taken the time to read through and get rid of any problems (if you have).

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Second place with a score of 84/100 goes to...

Along came love by AngelG1619

Review:

The title is okay. It’s kind of boring. The cover is pleasing to the eye, although it is a lot like other covers in its genre. The description is nice and gripping although I'm not sure it would attract me as a reader. You've got some persistent punctuation problems. Remember that there is usually a comma before and/or after a name depending on the situation.

You also have a bit of a problem with developing the character’s thoughts. Don't just list their actions. We need to know what they are thinking. Things like that can drag down your flow.
Your plot is pretty original, and it’s nice to not recognize a lot of clichés for once. Some developmental editing and proofreading can go a long way to attract readers. You're doing great! Keep it up!

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And...

First Place  with an amazing score of 97/100 goes to....

*drum rolls*

🎊Class of 95' by LaurieBeth5🎊

Review:

At last! A creative title! It tells us about the time period this is set in and sounds interesting. In the cover, I'm not sure what the hand is holding, but everything else is simple and lovely. The description is written like a professional and gives the reader the motivation to want to read your book.

Throughout the chapters I read, I could sense a lot of the past of the main character. High school sucks—everyone knows that—and you’ve done a great job of portraying that. I mean, life can suck in general, and you’ve portrayed that well also. And all that tension from the characters’ early lives is brought back to the surface. It’s amazing.

This is an amazing book if you're looking for something to hook you and make you love (and hate) the characters. It sucks you in and I haven't found a way to get back out. There are a few accidents by way of punctuation here and there, but it seems there has been a lot of care and time put into editing.

Everything flows very well, and it’s a very enjoyable book to read. I recommend it to anyone scrolling by.

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Congratulations to these amazing people, you obviously deserve it!✨

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