The wait is over, here are the results!
First of all, thanks to the amazing Judge!
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Third Place with a score of 77.5/100 goes to...
Promise Me by lost_little_child
Review:
The characters are very well developed. The plot was good, it's interesting and I love the relationship between the characters, their interactions are very amusing and fun. There is an even blend of angst, humor and mystery.
Some tips:
Find synonyms for said.
Use a better vocabulary.
Use italics to emphasize rather than bold
Never ever — I request — use 'timeskips'. You don't need to spell out time. Skip to make the reader understand it. Just use a page break.
Overall, the story is good. Good flow, even better characters, intriguing and interesting plot.
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Second Place with a score of 82/100 goes to....
806083 Insurrection by SadieECover
Review:
Need more details about feelings. Expound on the atmosphere more.
The sci-fi is not well done. They are 200 years in the future but they still have mediocre 21st century technology. Why? Especially given that Wayne is part of the black order.
Interesting characters, gotta give you that. Interesting plot. Polished writing.
But can be dry sometimes. Especially the first chapter. Also, consider proofreading. The dialogues are awkward sometimes. Try roleplaying the dialogues with someone.
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First place with a close score of (82.5/100) goes to....
*drum rolls*
🎊Starlight on Kansas by RacheliBlack 🎊
Review:
It’s well written. It could obviously be improved, but the author has achieved one of the most important parts of writing; a tone.
Interesting plot. Still in developmental stages. The description is good but is poorly formatted and that can be a huge turn off.
I like the leading character Loretta. The dynamics with her mom, however seem straight out of hunger games.
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