I was wondering what you guys think of the story so far. Are Annabelle and Daryl moving too fast? Should I be more descriptive? Im just throwing some ideas out there.
Please leave me some feedback in the comments. Thanks :)
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Rotting Hearts
Fanfiction"Shit!" It seemed as if they were multiplying by the second. "Run!" Whoever yelled their voice was barely audible over the screaming and gunshots. I couldn't leave them there. They're my family, they saved my life. I had to fight back. I stood and...
Feedback?
I was wondering what you guys think of the story so far. Are Annabelle and Daryl moving too fast? Should I be more descriptive? Im just throwing some ideas out there.
Please leave me some feedback in the comments. Thanks :)