Not good at descriptions...
Percy looks back, he was leaving. He was going to ask the gods to kill him because he for once, selfishly, wanted to go to Elysium. Wait, rewind. Why is the most powerful demigod to ever live leaving? Why is he giving up...
Percy looks back, he was leaving. He was going to ask the gods to kill him because he for once, selfishly, wanted to go to Elysium. Wait, rewind. Why is the most powerful demigod to ever live leaving? Why is he giving up? That story starts about two months prior today.
We're travelling back in time. See you on the other side!
Hmm, this is kind of like a pensieve. Probably because it is :)
Today is the 4 week anniversary of the end of the giant war. There, we found him, our two time Hero of Olympus. Looks like he just had a nightmare. Yup, that's why there are dark circles and the tired expression. Annabeth wouldn't sleep in the same bed (not like that, get your head out of the gutter). She had some sort of liquid from the Hecate cabin that stopped dreams. But our Hero thinks that it doesn't work on him since our favourite girlfriend gave him the wrong potion but he totally trusts her, sorry Percy.
I see a boy, about 18 running away from a hellhound. Look at that. The son of Poseidon is running towards Thalia's tree and has killed the monster with Riptide hardly taking more than a second. The boy has been covered in the monster dust too, oh well.
See those campers welcoming the boy. Chiron is asking for details.
"I was running from that monster and that boy just stood there!" he said pointing towards our saviour. The boy was then claimed by Poseidon. Uh oh. "All hail Denver Mark, son of Poseidon, god of the seas and horses", said Chiron. Everyone except the other son of the sea god kneeled, that seaweed brain was just staring in shock. Obviously, he did not know about this brother of his, one that was older than him too. What about the Great Prophecy, why was he the one in that gods forsaken prophecy. I know, probably because the fates hated him. Yup that's it. Oh well, as long as I had Annabeth, all would be fine.
Another time travel. *groans* I hate this pensieve. Aha! This is two weeks forward.
Almost everyone hated the saviour. Of course, he broke Katie's favourite (and lucky, mind you) rake. He also told on the Stolls. No one did that. Not even Annabeth. But he was wrongly accused and he was going to get to the bottom of this.
Spy time. DUN DUN DUUUN. *gasp* Oh no, it was Denver all along. He has been doing this. But when Percy told this to Chiron, he didn't believe him. Only Annabeth, Nico, Thalia and Grover stood by his side. Though Annabeth seemed a bit distant lately. But, Percy's going to propose to Annabeth today! I mean, according to Chiron, most demigods don't live for very long. Why wait for love when you already know the she is the love of your life?
Percy asked his wise girl to meet him on the beach. He even got permission from Annabeth's parents, including Lady of the Owls. Let's go to the beach, shall we? Why does the younger son of Poseidon look so dejected. A blonde haired girl making out with Denver. We do not need to see what is going on. Ew! Gross!
I don't recognise her. Oh noooooooooooo! That's Annabeth.
We're back to the present but the saviour's heart died. Two hours ago, in fact. When Annabeth had broken up with him, a week after the beach scene. It took her a week to own up to him. Probably had tried before as well. But, alas, she was a coward.
The ring:
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A/N I know the chapter is a clichè...sorry.
Edited A/N
618 words.
I think that this is a better chapter but give your opinion please.
