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I wanna thank everyone again for actually reading this story.

     Meliodas: *Snores*

     Zeldris: (That's just great. He fell asleep on me.)

     Meliodas: *Snores*

     Zeldris: (Why!? If I move he might not wake up and really pin me down. I can only move so much. Ugh. Who knows when he will wake up.)

     Ban: Hey, Cap'n? Uhhh...Oh...

     Zeldris: Help me.

     Ban: I think I'm actually just gonna go now... *Closes door*

     Zeldris: I guess I should try something else. Maybe something like this. *Inhales* MELIODAS WAKE THE HELL UP!

     Meliodas: *Wakes up* Eeee! Huh? Zel? Did I fall asleep?

     Zeldris: Not only did you fall asleep, you fell asleep on top of me. Do you know how heavy you are?

     Meliodas: Oops. Sorry Zel. But we should get down to breakfast.

     Zeldris: Fine. But if you fall asleep on me again, I won't hesitate to use a different mean to wake you up. And now thanks to you, I'm all up cranky.

     *Downstairs*

     Diane: Meliodas? How come your little brother looks like he had a bad morning? Did you pour water on him?

     Ban: *Chuckles*

     Meliodas: Oh, nothing...

     Zeldris: (And next time it better be nothing...)

     Meliodas: (I don't think that look in his eye means something good.) C'mon Zel, it was an accidental mistake.

     Zeldris: *Glares*

     Meliodas: (No, he wants to kill me now.)

     Elizabeth: I'll go outside to get Hawk out of the garden.

      Meliodas: You do that Elizabeth. Ow! What hit me?

     Zeldris: *Whistles innocently*

     Meliodas: Uhh huh....

     Ban: Who knew your younger brother could still best you without any sort of weapon or power.

     Meliodas: That was a lucky hit.

     Elizabeth: MELIODAS!

     Meliodas: Hey Elizabeth.

     Elizabeth: Your brother! Estarossa! He came here wounded and said he has to tell you something!

The ending is predictable and most of this is predictable comedy, I honestly think it's not as bad as "certain chapters."

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