'Always show, not tell,' is a big fat lie. If you always show, you'll have half a novel of descriptive words and flowy sentences that will be hard to read.
Here is a quick tip:
Show emotion.
Tell feelings.
Don't tell us 'she was sad.' Show us - 'Her lip trembled, and her eyes burned as she tried to keep her tears at bay.'
Don't show us 'her eyelids were heavy- too heavy. Her limbs could barely function and she couldn't stop yawning.' Tell us - 'she felt tired that morning.'
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