Dance Moms Fanfiction Reviews

Secrets (A Nia Frazier Fanfic)

Title: Secrets (A Nia Frazier Fanfic)

Author: Marisa616

Status: Completed

Description:
This is a Dance Moms fanfic about Miss Nia Frazier.

In this story Nia has a father who is abusive towards her.

Nothing can be done about it.

So why tell anyone?

My review:
First, I want to say that the author has stated that this was originally written by YouGoGlenCoco and was given to to the author to write it so no copying of anyone's idea here! I didn't add it in because it's not part of the story's description, okay?

So on to the review.

It was okay and I liked it, but I felt that it was more of a short story than a book. I felt that it was a little bit rushed, and I think that it needed a little something more for the plot and all. The grammar, spelling and tenses were fine, but like what I had commented on More Than Race, it shouldn't be a sentence for every paragraph because it makes it hard to read.

For some parts, I'm not exactly sure how to feel? For instance, Holly not knowing about Nia's father abusing Nia, I was kind of skeptical but at the same time it might be possible. And the last part where (SPOILER ALERT - DON'T READ THE REST OF THIS PARAGRAPH IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE BOOK) Josh woke up because of Nia's love? I'm . . . pretty sure that that has never happened.

But that doesn't mean that I didn't actually feel suspense. I love the action in the middle and wanted to read more! I would recommend this to anyone who just wants a short read, it's fast-paced and definitely not boring!

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Hey guys.

So I left you guys for what, like a month or two? You guys can blame me because I really haven't got any reason. Honestly, I was just too lazy to write. So now you guys know to never trust me when I say that "Hey guys I'm gonna update next week!" Because it probably won't appear until the next three weeks. Sorry about that.

So . . . How's it going for everybody in 2015? Miss it? Love it? Hate it? ;P

Happy late New Year guys,
LapisBlue