Dance Moms Fanfiction Reviews

More Than Race (N.F.)

Title: More Than Race (N.F.)

Author: Marisa616

Status: Completed

Description:
This is a Dance Moms fanfic about Nia Frazier.

Nia is more than her race.

If only Abby could see that.

My review:
This story takes place in 2014, probably Season 4.5, I think, but the new team that Abby formed won't exist in the story. This story is against racism, as you would know from the title. So in this story, Abby is racist towards Nia because Nia's African-American, but I don't think Abby's really racist in real life.

I see this story more as a short story, and I liked it. Just one thing though, I feel like in every paragraph there is only one sentence. Usually, if you put only a sentence in a paragraph, it's supposed to create suspense, so it was kind of hard to read. Other than that, I think it's okay.

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Nothing much to say about this, but it's my first time actually seeing a Dance Moms fanfic that's against racism! Check it out if you want to!

Okay, and I'm also feeling a bit tired so don't blame me . . .

Byeeeee,
LapisBlue