Feeling Strange (Crypto x Mirage)

Crypto x Mirage (Tips I Used )

(this was my first writing something so I'm not the best, but this is what I used)

-Really I tried to get as such much information of the characters as possible if it's through the apex website or through a simple google search:

Something I kept seeing is Crypto talking English without at least some of it in Korean like how he does in the game or he does then but when you translate, it's completely off. So after he says something in Korean, in the end, I put the English translation in parentheses, so the reader doesn't need to translate late and get something that's doesn't help understand the story better.

I made Mirage  Arabian. So I tried to incorporate that into this story. Even though he doesn't speak  Arabic in the game, I tried to make him say Arabic lines in his inter thoughts but at the same time, he is getting close with the person you ship with him. He could say some stuff in Arabic showing that he is comfortable with the person you are writing about. (Sorry for making such a bold statement.)

Always after writing check your grammar and spelling I always find mistakes in my writing but.... is sometimes lazy to fix it, I had to change a complete part because I messed up that bad. So don't worry about it.

I tried making the beginning chapters about the trailer but you don't have to. I tried getting information about the apex guns and shields (How many shots you have before you reload, stuff like that).

*Crypto came from season three, I used the season three map and gear. You don't need to do it exactly as is.

Try to also use their abilities to help tell the story too.

(No cap Season 5's voice lines between crypto and mirage are such a teaser TwT)

I enjoyed how they understood the characters' personalities and I look forward to reading more, great job! I really recommend that you check these stories out.

I hope this helps and I'll probably be adding more to this list.