So this is to anyone who writes choas betrayal stories. I'm not saying that any of your stories are bad. This is just some things that don't really make much sense.
1.) why doesn't percy just swear on the River Styx that he didn't do what he is being accused of.
2.) what if percy wasn't betrayed? Would he still be strong enough to stop the threat? Would chaos still come to get him?
3.) why does chaos only come to get percy after he's betrayed? If he needs him so bad then why not get him before?
4.) why does no one remember that percy's fatal flaw is loyalty till after he leaves?
5.) this one is just my opinion. I feel like percy would most likely not go with chaos. Idk why I think this,but I do
6.) I feel like when percy goes back to camp, he still has too much hate for the campers. Because unlike him they don't have loyalty as their fatal flaw.
AN:
That's all for now. Tell me what you think. Have a good time.
-Jackal
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Some things to think about ( on hold)
De TodoThis is about PJO and HOO. This is OC, things I noticed,some head cannons,among other things. I own NOTHING BUT MY OCS AND SOME OTHER THINGS. ALL CHARACTERS BELONG TO Rick Riordan.
