AN:
I deleted the first chapter and im gonna redo it with the same concept but a different idea.
And lets go on with the story:
You
J A D E N
I was at a party with my friends and we were having so much fun.
I noticed a girl come in and she was beautiful..
She had brunette hair and blue eyes.
She walked over to a group of girls and hugged them.
I guess they were her friends...
"Dude quit starring" my friend josh said laughing
"Oh uh sorry" i said scratching the back of my neck
Josh just started laughing even more.
"Bro i just dont want the same thing with mads, you know what happened when you guys dated, you havent left you're room in months, im just looking out for you" josh said and i nodded
I smiled at him.
So i dated this girl mads.
She was everything i could ask for.
There was this guy she would always tell me not to worry about, and I believed her, until one night she cheated on me with him.
I was devastated and i haven't left my room for months.
I never dated after her.
My thoughts got cut off by the girl I thought was beautiful.
"No thank you" she said
"Come upstairs with me baby girl" a guy told her while taking a grip on her wrist
"Please dont touch me" she said
"I said lets go upstairs" he said
I raised my eyebrows and i walked over them.
I stood next to her and looked at the guy,
"Thats my girl dude" i told him
He let go of her wrist and looked me.
"Oh my bad bro, i didnt know im s-" i cut him off
"First off dont call me 'bro' and second off apologize" i told him
"Im sorry" he told me
I started laughing
"Nah i mean to her" i told him pointing at the girl
"Oh uh sorry" he told her
"Nice... now get out" i told him
"Are you serious?" He asked
"Yes i am now go away" i told him more sternly
He rolled his eyes and walked out the front door.
I heard the girl let out a breath
"Thank you" she told me and she engulfed me in a small hug
"Your welcome" i told her
She turned around began walking away.
I stopped her before she got away..
"Uh.. can i maybe get your instagram? It's totally fine if not" i told her.
"Well i owe you one for saving my virgin ass, uh its @ xmads" she told me
I laughed and typed the username on my phone, i pressed the follow button and turned off my phone.
"Im coming wait" Mads said out of no where
I looked at her confused.
"What?" I asked her
"Oh sorry i was talking to my- nevermind have a good day uh" she said
"Jaden" i told her
"Have a good day jaden" she told me and smiled.
Her smile immediately faded and she walked away..
That's weird.
MADYLAN
Someone tapped my shoulder and i turned around to see a boy.
"Hi?" I said
"Why dont you come upstairs with me huh?" He asked
"No thank you" i told him
"Come upstairs with me baby girl" the guy told me while taking a grip on my wrist
"Please dont touch me" i told him
"I said lets go upstairs" he said
A young looking boy stood next to me and looked at the boy infront of me
"Thats my girl dude" he told him.
I smiled
He let go of my wrist and looked at him.
"Oh my bad bro, i didnt know im s-" the boy cut him off
"First off dont call me 'bro' and second off apologize" he told him
"Im sorry" he told the young boy
He started laughing
"Nah i mean to her" he told him pointing at me
"Oh uh sorry" the perv told me
"Nice... now get out" the young boy told him
"Are you serious?" He asked
"Yes i am now go away" he told him more sternly
He rolled his eyes and walked out the front door.
I let out a breath
"Thank you" i told him and engulfed him in a small hug
"Your welcome" he told me
I turned around began walking away.
He stopped me before i got away..
"Uh.. can i maybe get your instagram? It's totally fine if not" he told me.
"Well i owe you one for saving my virgin ass, uh its @ xmads" i told him.
Yes im a virgin
He laughed and typed the username on his phone,
"Baby come on" my boyfriend said behind me
"Im coming wait" i told him.
The guy looked at me confused
"What?" He asked me
"Oh sorry i was talking to my-"
I looked behind me to see no one. I frowned
"nevermind have a good day uh" i told him not knowing his name
"Jaden" he told me
"Have a good day jaden" i told him and smiled.
My smile immediately faded and i walked away..
Once i was outside the house where no one can here me, i turned around
And i saw my boyfriend.
"Come on when are you gonna get out of my head" i said rushing my hands through my hair.
"What do you mean?" He asked me.
"You know what i mean! Come on your making this harder that it already is." I told the boy infront of me
"I still don't understand" he said
"COME ON! Your dead! You died a year ago why cant you leave me, i miss you, i miss you a lot but I can't forget about you when you always show up!"
I told the figure of my dead boyfriend infront of me.
He looked hurt.
"Im sorry" he said
"Why, why did you have to leave me" i said with my voice cracking.
"I had no other choice, you know that baby" he said
He walked over to me and put a hand on my shoulder.
I flinched because i could actually feel his hand on my shoulder.
I stepped back.
I waved my hand on the figure.
Once i did that he disappeared.
I closed my eyes not wanting tears to fall.
I guess you want a backstory since this is too much yo handle right?
Well i once dated one of the sweetest guys ive ever met.
And we have dated for 2 years.
Last year smth unexpected happened.
We had a shooter in our school.
The shooter was gonna shoot me but my boyfriend stepped infront of me and he got the shot.
He died...
ever since then my boyfriend (liam) kept showing up once in a while.
I never realized how much losing a person can hurt until I actually lost one....
*******
Someone wrapped their hands around me and pulled me to hug.
"I cant i cant do it" i said
"Shhhh everything is okay"
I heard my brother tell me.
"I still see him. I see him everywhere" i told him
"This isnt good mads, i can get you therapy but its cool if you dont wa-"
I cut him off
"I dont want to" i told him pulling away from the hug
He nodded.
"If you ever need anything tell me" my brother told me and i nodded.
"Can we just go home?" I asked him and he nodded.
AN;
I like this version better but if you dont understand anything text me on private and ill explain it..
