MCU Spider-man Rewrite

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Welcome to the first chapter of Homecoming rewrite, i am gonna change alot, because there's so much that shows how MCU doesn't understand Spider-man in lot of ways, so i am gonna show how i think this should go. I do not own any characters or Marvel/MCU/Disney. I am just a fan of Spider-man and want to show the problems i have with the way MCU is treating Peter. Comment, vote if you're gonna like the story, and enjoy.
                                                                        
After the credits roll, we get a shot on a night sky, as the camera moves slowly down, showing us a City bank, and a part of a roof across the bank, a red and blue suited hero is croutching on the roof, we see the back of the superhero. "Bank heist at 10 o'clock at night? Don't they have a shelude?" Peter takes a deep breath and swings to the bank, landing on the wall, crawling in the window nearby, a cut to inside the building, 5 guys with guns and one with in a yellow shirt, brown sleevless hoodie and a yellow mask, that has a gauntlet on his right arm are inside the bank. One of the guys is opening the big safe, while the rest is walking around, prepared if someone gets inside. Obviously doing a bad job as Spider-man is upside down on a web behind one of the gunmen, shooting a web around his mouth, arms and legs, he pulls him up and leaves him hanging on the web from a ceiling. After taking another two guys out. The guy in yellow notices that someone's missing. "Hey, weren't there more of you?" Peter tham lands in a croutch behind him. "Sorry, they needed a nap." He says in his deeper voice, before swinging his fist at the yellow man. He narrowly dodges the attack and sends a green shock wave towards Peter, trowing him few feet back on the ground. "Ow, dude, what the hell?" Pete says coughting a bit in pain. "Heh, you like it? New toys from the Big man." He says as he sends another wave, Peter dodges it this time. "Big man? You work for him? Maybe you can give me something on him." Pete says as he shoots two webs towards him, pulling himself and shooting himself at the yellow man. He rolls to the side. The man aims his gauntlet at Pete, he calls on his men. "Get out, i'll take care of him and the cash." The men nod and run outside. "A man with a high confidence, huh? Fine, let's take it down a notch." Peter said before jumping and sending a web at the man, who then shoots another blast, this one Peter dodges by quickly shooting a web to the ceiling and pulling at the string. "You really need to work on your aim dude." Spidey says as he side-flips mid-air before shooting two webs at the ground and pulling himself down, another blast shooting above him as he moves down. Before the yellow man can aim again, he webs his face and right hand. A web connects to the man's torso, Peter than pulls at it, sending the man at him, and punching him. The man falls at the ground. "Time for some-" He then realises that the man is unconcious. "Dammit. I need to pull my punches a bit more." He then starts to walk away. "Ok, a lot more..." He says before shooting a web at a window, getting outside.

We see him swing in the night towards his home. After a minute he lands next to his window, looks around and crawls in. He's crawling on the ceiling, looks around the room, and slowly gets to the ground on a web. He looks at the closed door, listening in. Silence. He breaths out a sight of relief. He taks of his mask, showing Peter with a black eye, half-way throught the process of healing, a small cut on his right cheek and big bags under his eyes, showing his lack of sleep, his hair is messy and he looks like a mess. He sighs and hits the spider in middle of his suit with an open palm, ending with the suit getting bigger and falling on the floor. He picks up the suit and hides it in his backpack, before falling into his bed. Instantly falling asleep.....

We get a shot at a running pair of sneekers, and a mumbling "i am so screwed, late again." It's Peter's voice, we get a better look at him, he's running on an empty campus, about to enter the Midtown High. He wears a grey sweatshirt, a white shirt underneath, pair of jeans and blue sneekers, his backpack on both of his shoulders, his black eye's fully healed, the cut being nearly healed, the bags under his eyes still there. He then enteres the school.

A shot on classroom doors as a siluethe of a boy shows up behind it, a second later, the door slowly open, as Peter's head pokes in, the teacher stopping mid-sentence. "I-i am sorry, i-um-i slept in." Peter says with a nervous smile. The teacher shakes her head, disapointed. "Again master Parker? One more time and you'll end up in detention you know." Peter nodded before entering the room and closing the door behind him.

It was lunch time, we see Peter and Ned sitting next to each other, and Michelle with a book in front of them. "Peter, how did you slept in this time?" Asked Ned. "W-well, i turned off my alarm." "Why?" "I-it kept waking me, s-so i turned it off." Michelle put down the book and looked at Peter. "That's what they're for idiot." "W-well.. When you had only 3 hours of sleep, you-you don't really care." Peter nervously laughted. "So... Will you come to the decathlon team today?" Changed the subject Ned. "N-no, I have some work after school." "Stark?" Asked Michelle, raising her eyes from the book she was reading again. "Yea, Stark." "Have you, i don't know, thought about asking him for different hours? So you can hang out with your friends?" Wondered Michelle. "Y-yea, bu-but he's very strict about it. So i have to go right after school." "What are you working on anyway, I am sure it's something awsome?" Chimmed in Ned. "No, not really, it's nothing special, he doesn't let me do anything important, but i like the spot, it's nothing big, but it's still needed." Peter said with a smile. A ring was heard throught the school, ending the lunch break.
                                                                        
So, the first chapter of Spider-man Homecoming is here, tell me what you think, or comment anything in general, if you enjoyed don't forget to vote, and see you next time... Whenever that may be.