MCU Spider-man Rewrite

Friendly Neiborhood

We still hear the end of the last ring, people leaving the school throught the front doors. As everyone leaves, Peter, Ned and Michelle are at the end talking before Peter waves at them and runs off from them.

Peter is going throught the streets of Queens, then an older lady with shopping bags stops him with a smile. "Peter, dear! How are you?" Peter smile back at her. "Maria! Hi, i am doing good, what about you?" Asks Peter while automaticly grabbimg her shopping bags and going along with her. "Good, good, but i am missing my son, him and his new girlfriend left and went to live in Washington." "Mike found himself someone? That's good to hear, i worried he would never move on." A cut to a apartment, as the door open, Maria and Peter entering the room. Peter went to the kitchen where he put the shopping bags. "Thank you Peter, i can do the rest myself." She said with a smile. "You sure? I can help you if you need me." She shook her head. "No, no, go, enjoy some of your life, don't waste it on an old hog like me." She laughted a bit. "But i am enjoying it, helping people." "Fine Peter, but still, you should go, i can do this myself." Peter thought for a second then nodded. "Ok, I'll go. Nice seeing you're doing fine. Bye." He smiled. "Bye." She said with a smile.

We see Peter entering a deli, a middle aged man behing the counter. "Mister Parker! Back again i see?" "A day without getting something from you wouldn't be a proper day Mr. Delmar." "So the classic?" "ehm.. Yea." Mr. Delmar said something in Spanish to the guy in the back. "So how's school?" "Oh, you know, still the same." "So it's all good then?" Peter thought for a second before nodding. "I wouldn't say all, but it's good." A ring was heard behind the man. Mr. Delmar than turned around, grabbed something and turned back on Peter with Peter's food. Peter payed for it, grabbed the food. "Thanks. And bye." "Bye Pete." Said the man with a smile.

We see Peter walking throught Queens, some people waving at him, then a homeless man in his 40's sitting on the ground with a cup for money, calls to him, Peter turns around at him. "Garry, how are you?" He asked as he dropped 2 dollars into his cup. "Pretty good, for my standarts. How's your aunt?" "She's fine, at home today, a day to relax after whole week." "That's nice. Tell her i said 'hi'." "I will, see ya Garry." Garry waved at him as Peter slowly ran off, until he ended in an alley way.

He looked around, croutched as he took of his backpack, opened it, took of his sweatshirt and shirt, pulled up a red and blue suit. A cut to him in the suit, maskless, as he pulls up the mask he says "Let's rock." He hits the spider on his chest, tightening the suit around him. He grabs the backpack and jumps up at the roof of the  building. He trows the backpack at the wall next to him, webbing it up. "Not letting you get robbed this time." Peter mutteres. He walks to the edge of the building, does a few stretches and jumps.

He shoots a web, swings on it upside down, shoots another, and swings close to the ground, when he's next to Garry he trows another two dollars into his cup." Hello there Garry, man!" Spider-man says with his spider-voice (AN: everytime he has the suit on, he has the deeper confident voice, hiding his identity, and making him sound older.) Spidey swings for a while around Queens, stopping a purse snatcher, a bike theft, help a kid with his bike, helped an old lady with the directions, and few more hero acts.

The sun is slowly setting down, Peter is sitting on the roof he started on, a notebook in his lap, a pen in his right hand, playing with it between fingers. "So the x is..... 23,5." He mutters, than an alarm sounds in his mask, we see the mask HUD, with a note 'Time to hand your report!'. Peter sights, grabs his bag and pulls out his phone, goes throught contacts, finds Happy and calls him. After few seconds, a sound was heard from his phone. "This is Happy Hogan, i cannot pick up the phone, or just don't want to, after the signal, leave a messeage, maybe i'll listen to it." Peter chuckles at that, than after a beep, he talks in his normal voice. "Hey, this is Peter Parker, giving you today's report, school was normal, not that you care about that." He chuckled again. "And the patrol is going fine, did the classics, met some new robbers, not really friendly people." Peter joked. "And right now, it's pretty quiet so I am doing my homework. Oh and... Uhh...... No, that's all, nothing more to say, i hope you're good, and...."talk" to you tommorow." Said Peter before hanging up. Peter took a deep breath. "Should i tell him about the yellow dude from yesterday? No, no, he would just send someone from Tony, and this is my job, Queens is my responsibility. And i'll do this alone. He'd only complicate things." Peter said to himself. He sighted again before standing up, and putting things into his backpack. "I still don't get why do i have to do these reports, not like Happy cares, and Tony propably never listens to the-huh?!" An alert went off in his mask, a silent alarm in the Queen's bank. "Huh, back again? Fine then, round two "Big man". He then puts the backpack on and swings off.

Peter lands on the banks roof, noticing a huge hole in the middle. "What the-" He pulled down his backpack, webbing it to the roof. He looks inside the bank, seeing a guy in a suit with mechanical wings, robbing the place, thanks to yesterday, it's closed down, but the repairs haven't started yet, thankfuly or there would propably be few dead bodies. He slowly gets down in his classic upside down move. "Never thought i would see a chicken steal." The winged man slowly turned around, chuckled and answered. "You're here.... Good, i wanted a bonus." Peter gave a confused looks, showed by the mask's eyes and tilted head. "What do you m-" His eyes widen as the man flies towards him in a huge speed, hitting him in the chest with the wings. Bringing him into the air, outside the bank. Stopping his flight, ending with Peter getting few feet higher because of the momentum, before falling back down, ending with the winged man kicking him with both legs in the chest, sending him into the roof. "Suprised huh? Big man got angry with you, so now he'll pay anyone who will take you down a sweet bonus, whitch will come in handy!" He yelled before grabbing him with his boot claws, picking him up into the air, good 8 stories up, before letting him fall. "Bye Spider-man!" He yells as he lets him go. After a second, Peter hits the ground with his back, yelling in pain, staying on the ground, hurt. The man flies off with the cash. People come around the hero, looking at him, not knowing what to do, then Spider-man grunts, and slowly picks himself up, grunting and groaning in pain. When he stood, not standing fully straight, he shot a web at the Bank and pulling himself up.

We see a door in a dark room, they open, a light behind them, then Peter slowly walks in, sloutched over from the last fight. He slowly moves to his room before getting inside, and closing the door
                                                                      
Another chapter done, this time we saw Peter in action and met Vulture. Now as you have noticed, i did some changes to Vulture amd Shocker, instead of doing what they did because of Stark, i made them work for "The big man" whitch you propably have some guesses who it is, the reasons why they are doing this will be said later. Especialy with Vulture who's gonna be main vilian. I also tried to show that Peter is a good, helping neibor even outside the maks, and him knowing people on the street and other families. Tell me what you think, and see you some other time. Comment, vote if you enjoyed, amd see you some other time.