What NOT To Do In A Percy Jackson Or Hoo FANFIC!

Apearance! * Another facepalm* and breathing problems

First off: What the Hades does orbs mean like where did the word irises or pupil or eyes go? and her skin tone is pale, like why does everybody have to be white cant they be brown like Leo and piper or like frank or Hazel! But nooooooooooo she has jet black hair, her lips are as red as a rose her 'Orbs' were as blue as the ocean her skin was as white as snow----- let me tell you something: Snow white is already a story!!!

OR Her hair was as yellow as corn and her 'Orbs' were as green as grass her lips were as pink as a heart on a vaentines day card her skin was as pale as white roses, And she is so freaking perfect all the boys fall for her and the girls get jealous but when she looks in the mirror she just like '' Why am i so ugly and full of flaws!" *sobs*

And then theres me with unfleeked eyebrows and hideous mud color eyes with lips like dirt I should be complaining-- and not to mention that upper lip and acne problem!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE STAHP IT RIGHT NOW!

So in many fan fictions they always say this one very annoying thing were the character says/thinks, 'I let go of the breath I didn't know I was holding' LIKE BREATHE PROPERLY LIKE THIS HAPPENS 24/7 all the Fracking time!!!

(And I know about the spelling errors)

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Hey guys sorry for the short chippy hope you likeeeee!