𝓢𝓬𝓪𝓻𝓼 𝓣𝓸 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓻 𝓑𝓮𝓪𝓾𝓽𝓲𝓯𝓾𝓵

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I am honestly really super duper sorry that this is coming late!

Okay I'll get right on it!
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Scars to your beautiful :A Mordern Beauty and the Beast Retelling
 
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Synopsis/Blurb
The synopsis is great! Giving the readers a glimpse into the lives of the two main characters while leaving enough out to make you want to read is, which is the whole point of a synopsis. Great Job!

*The Cover*

Now this cover is great but I feel it could look a bit more professional, and it could have a bit more beauty and the beast vibe but that's just my opinion...So I'd give the cover a 6.5.

*Chapter one*
Can I just say I am awed at your gift of description.. Like honestly! They give me goosebumps!!  And it's really awesome because your readers are able to create the scene easily which is a gift every author needs. But the title of the chapter could be a little more creative don't you think?
Now another thing I  love about the book is how easy it is to relate with the characters ... Beats me how you do it 😂 but it's awesome!.. We were able to feel the raw pain Callista felt and connect with the story on a deeper level. Also I can tell that you did your research on his sickness which not many authors take the pains to do, plus it's creating awareness for this sickness.. I hope you're not feeding us rubbish 😅.
And the connection between her and her father is so touching! Definitely makes you want to read on to find out what happens.
Great start to the book!

*Chapter Two*
I like the fact that you put a face to the name. It goes hand in hand with your description. You have a broad vocabulary and it makes the book seem more developed. Getting a glimpse into her father's illness was also nice. And it's cool the way the characters are sort of connected, makes it really seem like a small town. 
I like how despite the fact it's fiction, the scenarios are realistic. I love the deep understanding she has with her friend, and the importance and value you placed on family! And aunt Georgia's sense of humor is killer, she seems like a fun character to write!
And when she jumped over... Awesome 😂😂
Yeah chapter two was awesome!

*Chapter three*
This chapter was good Yh, now I wanna talk about character development.
There isn't much to say here  because you have done an excellent job!
Callista, the main character, the belle of our story is a very interesting character! I love seeing the world from her eyes, and I love the value she places on family and friendship...and her character is exactly how I would have pictured belle, you even put the whole book thing 😏. Her only flaw (I mean like the characters flaw not the book)  is that she doesn't open up or trust people.

Larkin, your everyday mordern beast 😂
You've penned his character so perfectly!
I'm excited to see the progress he makes with Callista around.... And I totally ship them! 😙😙 Callarkin😂😂

He's the perfect mix of dark and brooding! While still managing to capture our hearts 🧡 although he can be a dîck at times 😅
I really hope he fully recovers from the loss of his parents seeing as it did a number on him and obviously his mental health too 😔
Overall, he's well written.

Aunt Georgia is so awesome! She's so bubbly, fun and down to earth and still very level headed, which is really cool! 

Ava, Callista's little sister, although we didn't really hear much from her she sounds scary 😂😂and she's really intelligent for her age. Which is a good thing of course.

Mrs Esther, one of my favorites! (but then again who isn't)
She's such an angel, being a maternal figure to Larkin and sticking around even though he isn't the friendliest person in the world.
Hiring Callista because she was good for Larkin was so cute and such a maternal  move😂😏
Her heart attack was so emotional and scary I was at the edge of my seat waiting to know what happened.

*Positives*
~Character development.
~The fact that there is a steady update schedule.
~The synopsis.
~The unique character names
~The story plot

*Negatives*
~The cover
~It's not really a negative but it might bother some people that the book isn't complete.

*Overall*
Overall this is a very great book!!
There aren't much negatives as you've noticed, it's just that good. And it's really cool how you subtly inserted the whole beauty and the beast vibe (although it took me a while to get it 😂😔)
I would totally recommend it to all my friends! And I definitely can't wait to see the end!

So, Scars to your beautiful: A Modern Beauty and the Beast Retelling, deserves, four and a half orange hearts.....🧡🧡🧡🧡🍭

P. S  ' 🍭' means .5

Thank you so much for letting me do this!

After this, I'm gonna add your book to a new reading list I call "Mik Pik's" as promised! 
                                                                      xx🧡xx

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