so i want to rewrite this book and change a couple of things. i feel like i stopped writing cause i wasn't connecting a lot of the family and oc's i was writing. it's not a definite yes because i go through phases where i want to write and where i don't want to write so i don't want to get your guy's hopes up. if i were to re-write i have a couple of questions:
-should the baby stay a girl or should i switch them to a boy? (not a huge change but it does have an impact in some way)
-should she stay a year above/ same year as noah or switch her to the same year as elle and lee? (this will impact the writing going into the second movie)
-i want to rename the main oc cause i feel her nickname is way too close to elle, so any suggestions i have a few in mind but lmk if you like anything?
-i'm definitely going to change the face claim and the family a bit. i was thinking keep the brother and mother the same face claim and make it so it's two moms and the main oc's biological mom is hispanic but the same sperm donor was used so technically she and chris are half-siblings. anything that you guys would like to add on?
i already have a new face claim for both the main oc and the new mother both are hispanic. i relate more to poc main characters because i an afro-latina so this way i can add on my own culture without it coming across as weird.
another thing that has brought this rewrite on is the fact that in the time span from my last update to now, i had another sister and it's brought more of a sense on how babies behave and what to do. i want this book to be as accurate as possible probably won't be the most reliable source of information but i'm not claiming to be an expert.
if this re-write does happen it's probably going to take a while for me to actually post because i want to write as many chapters as possible before my inspiration is lost and the story gets put on hold again.
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