A story based on manan (Manik&Nandini)🌸
More cannot be described here....
Prolouge🌸
Manik-Hum tumse bahut pyaar karte hai nandini bachpan se .......
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Manik- Kuch bologi nahi ??
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.Nandini nods in no....
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.Manik's mom- Beta bhul ja usko !
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. . . . . Morning Murty House . . . . . Nandini wakes up & then start getting ready for her reunion party she gets message from her friend that girls should wear saree & for boys suit *Nandini makes a pout listening this and goes to kitchen and asks naina for a saree naina goes to her room & gives her a new saree* Seeing this nandini asks - Maa yeh aapne kab kharida ??? Naina - Yeh tumhare engagement ke liye kapre kharidne gaye the tab tumhare papa ne pasand kiya tha tumhare shaadi me dene ke liye ..... . . . . . Nandini remembers scenes of yesterday Manik's word rang in her ears also how Nyonika called her characterless....... . . . . . FLASHBACK Manik- papa yeh larki pyar ke kaabil nahi hai Nyonika - Aapne apne bacche ko is batchalan larki ke liye mara ha . ,
, . . . . Nandini's eyes welled up no matter how much Manik loves her his anger is something makes her fear him very much since childhood...... . . . *seeing her teary eyes naina thought to make her mood light & say - Nandu chal ja naha le *nandini comes out of trance & say* - Jee maa . . . *nandini goes while naina in her mind - hum jante hai nandini ki tum manik babu ko pasand karti ho par ab tumdono ki shaadi tut gayi hai or unke liye jo tumhare mann me bhaavnaaye (feelings) hai woh ab thik nahi hai ....... . . . . . Morning Malhotra Haveli
Manik opens his eyes & found nyonika sitting near him nyonika see him awake & say - Manik baccha kaisa hai tu ?? Manik - Hum thik hai maa Nyonika - Ye kya haal banaya hua hai apna beta pura saaman tor - phor diya haath bhi kaat liya bass us karamjali ke liye....... (Manik shouts -Maa...... He fisted his hands and his jaw clenched)
Everyone sitting in hall hears his shout
*he got up from bed & then goes to cupboard takes a white shirt and black jeans goes to washroom to take bath* thats when he realize his clothes are changed (cabir ne badle honge - says in his mind) . . . . Manik was going ..... *When nyonika from behind says* - Kaha ja raha nasta to karte ja ........... Manik - Nahi karna and goes......
Everyone sighs while raj get up & goes to study room . . . . . Cabir & Mukti asks their parents if they should go or not while Rajeev say - Beta tumdono ko kya hai jao enjoy karo Cabir - Par papa manik wo *rajeev cuts him off* & says- beta jo kal manik bete ne kiya woh bohot galat tha tum samajh rahe ho na (cabir nods) & they both CabMu goes to get ready in hurry ......
Meanwhile Naina make Nandini wear Saree .....
ओह! यह छवि हमारे सामग्री दिशानिर्देशों का पालन नहीं करती है। प्रकाशन जारी रखने के लिए, कृपया इसे हटा दें या कोई भिन्न छवि अपलोड करें।
Nandini Saree❤
Nandini looked so lovely ...... Naina admired her & put little kohl behind her years ........ *Santosh shouts from downstairs* - Nandu.....Chal beta time ho gaya ! *Nandu also shouts from upstairs* - Aayi papa & wears her heels & goes down............ Santosh looked at her & kisses her forehead (nandu smiles) .Santosh starts his scooty & nandini sits behind & then they goes........ . . . . . After 10 minutes bell rings (Naina opens the door & see CabMu Cabir - Chachi nandu tayyar ho gayi ?? Naina - Beta woh toh chali gayi papa ke saath apne CabMu look at each other & sighs Take her blessings & left in hurry . . . . . .They reach school Function was started Cabir spots Nandini & say - Nandu tumhara drama Nandini - Woh cabir hamara partner nahi aaya hai Cabir - Cabir thinks something & say hum drama karenge *nandini looks at him shockingly & says par cabir* (cabir cuts him off) & says - Hume lines yaad hai ...... . . . . . .Function get over .... CabMuNan comes out talking giggling suddenly Nandini was walking looking down and talking with bro-sis when Nandini feels some strong gaze on her she look upwards
& saw Manik on his bullet looking at her with guilty eyes
ओह! यह छवि हमारे सामग्री दिशानिर्देशों का पालन नहीं करती है। प्रकाशन जारी रखने के लिए, कृपया इसे हटा दें या कोई भिन्न छवि अपलोड करें।
CabMu followed her gaze & saw manik...... Nandu looked down breaking the eyelock Manik gets down from his bullet & was about to approach them..... just then Santosh came & see manik he ignores him & shouts - Nandu bacche aa baith Nandini - Jee papa (she bids bye bro-sis) & then sits behind her papa scooty & santosh starts the scooty & leave *manik was looking at her retiring figure* then he saw cabmu Cabir shouts - Gaari me baith mukti *mukti sits down & cabir starts his car & drove away* Manik feels hurt & he goes to factory ! . . . . . Santosh drops Nandini home & goes malhotra mansion Nandini changes & lies down on bed thinking about her life & dozed off . . . . . FACTORY Manik was drinking continuously one after one beer his eyes were blood red he was feeling very disgusting on himself for doubting her for doubting on her character she is delicate like a rose petal and he is hard like a throne....
Dadi's words was continuously running on his head
FLASHBACK
18 saal pehle humne ek galti ki thi manik aur nandini ki shaadi tay kar ke....... aur aaj hum apni iss galti ko sudhaar rahe hai aur abhi aur isi waqt yeh rishta torte hai manik aur nandini ki shaadi ab nahi hogi ..... Dadi's slap ........
. . . . . Chandu - Bhaiya jii bass kijiye aur kitna piyenge aap ...... Manik - Hatt chandu mat rok hume ! Chandu - Bhaiya bass kariye bhaiya aapne 12 beer pi li hai tabiyat kharab ho sakti hai Manik - Hone do mar jaane do hume nandini ke bina ji ke kya karenge hum Chandu - Bhaiya jii sambhaliye khud ko Manik - Hume sambhalna wahi jaanti thi usse dekh ke hee hum shaant ho jaate the hamari jaan hai woh aur humne ussi pe shaq kiya apni jaan pe ..... sala sach hee kehta hai pura begusarai jaanwar hai hum Chandu - Nahi bhaiya jee aisa nahi hai Manik looks at the beer bottle & caresses the bottle like he is caressing nandini's hair & says - Dadi sahi kehti hai hum tumhare layak nahi hai meri jaan tum kaha aasmaan se aayi pari & *closes his eyes remembering her view which he saw few hours ago* & continue saying - aur ham kaha ek jaanwar jo bass logo ko rulana jaanta ho ab tum bhi humse nafrat karne lagi ho & starts crying
(chandu calls raj & tells him everything)
(Raj comes & saw manik blabbering he made him stand & start taking him inside factory Manik- Papa aapko humne sharminda kiya na kal par papa hum kya karte hame maa ne aake bataya ki *he blabbers all things* (raj understood nyonika is one by whom this damaged caused but somewhere he is also known to Manik's anger Manik's anger is something everyone used to manipulate him since childhood he was thinking all this) and drags manik & made him lie down in a bed (In factory there is a private room of Manik) Raj looks at Manik sleeping face caresses his hair & kissed his forehead & closes the door . . . (There is no love on earth greater than that of a father for his son or daughter) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Please vote & comment 🌸 Few words for Manik🌸 Few words for Nandini🌸 Any scene you guys want to see? . . . . . . . . . OK THANKS BYE 🌸
