Swept

Luminesque ( Commentary )

hi

Okay first of all, HOLY CRAP that was asdfasdghljkspwuie quite the experience to write.

People ask why I despise writing poems - or any of the sort for 2 reasons;

1. the english system ptsd

2. they're always emotional

yet with this I genuinely enjoyed writing since it was on my behalf, and allowed me to flourish my emotions onto this weird website called 'wattpad'

We haven't stepped foot into Swept - not quite - however I do want to clarify that this was a glimpse of what you're in for.

The 'you' in the chapter was Oscar Borealis, waltzing through a premonition of a dream

(that he'll soon forget, 'cause it do be like that);

This is Oscar, my blue, closeted gay child you'll soon get to know as time goes on,

Swept away by some hottie dork;

Named Ruben.

damn that's pretty gay

This a story based off my experiences in freshman year (9th grade) of High School - as my life literally got flipped-turned upside down (i.e. Swept) by some idiot I re-encountered that year.

(And of course, with a magical twist to it 😘)

Nonetheless, THANK YOU (asiduhfoiawe) from the bottom of my heart - for reading the first ever chapter of Swept.

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you know where to find updates ;)

"Tell me something I don't know." ✍️

All his life, Oscar Borealis has been left with nothing but empty promises. His fate; interwoven with heartache, the family business, a kickass parasol, and an undying passion for Wonder; the magic of this world.

Entering his first year of Ecstasy High School, he ends up in an unkempt community - who's ranking isn't the highest in his district. A secret he'll never tell a soul is how disappointment has a familiar scent to it, as it's never smelt fouler before.  .  .  .

By a slip of fate, he reconciles with Ruben, an aspiring Beacon Soldier who's intentions (to this day) remain unclear. Who's optimism will surely be the death of him - who's obliviousness PERSISTS the fact that he's a flamboyant dork -

Another heartache just waiting to happen.

Join us on this modern-fantasy-reality of self-discovery and moving on, as they begin to realize their paths are more drawn together than they ever thought it'd be; As one, becomes perpetually swept, for the other.

The Story Remains Cast On 8/12