Your title isn't something new. But fits perfectly with the plot. I felt the blurb and cover needs work. I didn't find any flaw in grammar. Amazing work with the character plot development. I highly recommend it to other readers. Expect a shout out from me after the results 😉. In short I totally love your book and will continue reading it till the end.
Remarkable work with the title. In the blurb I am not sure if I got the correct picture of the story. Grammar is top notch for me. As for character development I need to know more how they matured or cope up after Tanya's death to judge it.
You can improve your cover, title and blurb. Grammar needs editing. The overall development isn't satisfying for me. But it is enjoyable to read. One of the best books that I read based on "Miraculous".
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