Chapter 1

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--A/N-- Hey guys so this is my first fanfic and I'm excited about this book and I hope you like it. This is a picture of the girl you met in this chapter.
All rights go to BBC.

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Maddie's POV
"So Doctor where are we going today?" I ask running into the Console room of the TARDIS. Wearing my TARDIS blue button up shirt and my skinny jeans with my converse.

"We are going to Aploea" The Doctor says while running around the console flipping this and turning that and pushing that thingie that goes ding. than he looked up at me. "A-Apola?" I try to say right but fail.

" Yes, Aploea keep up.They are a distant cousin of the Gallfrayian's!
I got this message on my psychic paper when I woke up this morning." He says while handing me the black wallet with the psychic paper inside.

He kept talking about how they have griffins that can travel time and space, Minotaurs, and orange grass that smells like tangerines there.

I just stare at what the words say 'Aploea, R.a.v.e.n, street 12574'
"What does that mean?" I say handing the paper back to the Doctor who is now just staring at the screen thing that spins around and is typing something in on the dash.

"It means that someone wants to meet me on Raven street or it could be street 12574 and the person could be Raven, who knows!" the Doctor says excitedly running to the door of the TARDIS and opens it up.

We get greeted with the sight of an army of Cybermen aiming their guns at the two of us. There's building burning and crashing to the ground, several dead Aploeans strewn around on the street. Also a hospital with several injured people, doctors and nurses running around frantically.

"Doctor I thought you said that we where just going to meet someone?!" I say with my hands up in the air freaking out with a Cyberman's arm gun pointed at my face.
"Well I guess they were the ones who sent the message." The Doctor says in the same tone as me with his sonic screwdriver pointing at the Cyberman's chest.

Right than a girl who looks in her e walks out from be hide the Cyberman "I don't think she's human" the Doctor says looking at her with excitement.

The girl has jet black hair, that's underneath a black and silver hood Assassins Creed style she's wearing a black speedo type long sleeve shirt, a black and silver corset over top to match the hood no doubt. Black gloves going to her elbows, dark jeans, and black combat boots. Carrying a large compound bow, with pure ultrasolim arrows in her leather quiver.

"Oh, hey Doctor! You like my army?" The stranger asks. gesturing to the cybermen.

"So who are you then? The Doctor asks impatiently

" I'm Raven, hope you enjoy your stay in my new planet!" The newly named Raven smiles. The Cybermen grab onto both the Doctor's and my arms tightly and pull us away.

"Raven! Why are you doing this?" The Doctor shouts out, struggling against his restraints.

."Lock them up." Raven says blandly, playing with the feathers on the notched arrow.

"Affirmative." The metal men say.

"What?!" I scream when the two Cyberman pull me into a underground building.

I started yelling at this, Raven girl... "Let me go! Let me go! Let me go!!!"

"Nothing can keep me behind bars!" The Doctor yells.

"Oh, we know!" Raven smiles at us.

They started to hold my arms tighter than before. They I felt a small prick on my neck. My eyes started to drop. I felt so tired...I can't move or speak.
I fell myself start to pass out, but not until I see them do the same thing to the Doctor. He was yelling something but I couldn't make out what he was saying, then everything went black...

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A/N Oh no! what's gonna happen to them?!

Hey guys, sorry its so short, but I'm gonna write the next part right now! So what did you think of the first chapter?
And anything I messed up on you can tell me.
Im not the best at writing so feel free to tell me if I did something wrong.

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