snowkit's journey

chapter 18

one day hawkfrost called him and a riverclan she-cat to train together. today they were doing water training, only, the river they were training in looked like a green slime. the riverclan cat pushed him in the water and that caught him by surprise. snowtuft resurfaced and tried to slash at the she-cat. she retaliated and pushed on  snowtuft's chest, knocking air out of him. she started to push him under.

she unsheathed her claws and pushed him towards a sharp stone, this allowed him to scream out bubbles. his lungs were now empty, this cat was drowning him!

he flailed his paws but to no avail. black started to edge over his eyes. 

hatred.

pain.

loss.

betrayal.

it was all he could feel, all he could see, all he knew.

his eyes started to open again. he saw his body being pulled to shore. he saw the riverclan she-cat shocked, he saw hawkfrost walking up to him.

he remembered the last thing his mother said to him, the last words he would ever hear from her,

''please find a way to leave them, so that you can be with me again''

''now you are truly one of us, snowtuft'' hawkfrost said.

im sorry mother, i have failed you...

that is the end of this book. sorry it just ended with him dying but i hv no idea how i would have ended it any other way. i dont like making a cat die twice and he cant go his mother in starclan cuz in canon and my other books he dies in the dark forest so sorry if the end was a dissapointment. im gonna start a new book. i have two ideas 'duckheart's storm' or  'close shadows'

here is a blurb for them

[duckheart's storm]

'storms, storm everywhere. torturing everything in it's path!' she whimpered, unable to control herself

duckheart always seemed like there was something wrong with her brother. as her destiny changes over time, cats are dying and others are frightened. its up to her to stop her brother from the evil.

[close shadows]

no one knows what is going on. no one knows how this is happening. no one knows how to stop this.

apart from crypresspaw.

cypresspaw goes on to find who is doing this, unlocking a great secret no one could ever know about, ever.

ill to a vote or something. please choose which to make a book about in the meantime ill be working on a plot for my book that i dont have a title for. please read 'please help me with the title' and do what the title says. bye.