Original:
The storm followed them. Silently at first, it arose from clear skies, darkening the looming fortress before them. With the earsplitting crash of a thunderbolt, a dark aura surrounded and marked the brothers as the power of their full magic consumed them. Lightning zipped across the opening, the howling winds of his twin just behind. With an immense display of power and strength, they shattered the ranks of their enemies. The castle fared no better, as the height of their destruction. Energy bright and energy wild coursed through their rushing veins. A storm born of equaling powers cast aside all else. The twins of destruction laid waste to a guild of rivaling darkness. Beware these two, oh evils. Beware the twins of storm...
Rewrite:
The storm followed them. In silence and darkness, their power only grew. A cruel smile touched the lips of the one, feared in the eyes of the many.
A crash. Wind and lightning, bright and wild, howling, swirling, surrounding. Each marked with the darkening powers of demons. A nod, and into the castle they ran. Obliterating the ranks of their enemies with ease, the storm-brothers shattered all rivaling darkness. The guild was silenced with hurricane winds, destroyed in all manner of riotous catastrophe.
Rubble of their fortress is all that remains, a scar of the earth defined by lack of memory. Beware the storm-devil twins, all ye evils, lest your very existence be shattered.
"Nothing beside remains." - Percy Bysshe Shelly
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Origins One-shots
FanficSmall descriptive pieces based off the Origins roleplays! Poetry, prose, song-snippets, and narrative whump included! I'm taking requests! TW: gore
