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Hey guys! Thank you so much for starting this journey with me! This is the first draft so there may be some errors.
Specific things I'd like feedback on:
Any parts that are confusing or unclear
Things that pull you out of the story or feel off
Lines that make you laugh, swoon, sad, nervous, etc.
What you like and dislike about the different characters
If the chemistry between the characters is good
Does the story flow well and hold your interest?
What makes you excited to keep reading (or if it doesn't)
Typos or other errors you spot
Thanks again and as always stay safe and save the fishies! ~ Kayla
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The Syren Queen | The Oceane Series
FantasyThey said she is a tyrant of a Queen. And they are right. Being the Queen meant she could be who she wanted. And what Sedna wanted, more than anything in the world, was justice. So when she whitenesses her lover cheating on her with her sister, she...
