A Mistake's Beginning [Moved to AO3]

Chapter 5: Surprise, Surprise

Credited to Harrish6, who's account is found on ao3, FanFiction. Net, And Wattpad. I do not know if they are on quotev, but I've found them on those platforms.

Although They basically discontinued their stories as they haven't updated their stories in a long time, but everyone credits them for the inspiration of creating the forced god part of the undertale fandom.

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Some of the Sanses nearby read the textboxes and were gossiping to the others, telling them about this. Dream and Blueberry read the textbox as they were the closest there, Error is starting to glitch from all of the chatter making him unable to move.

Dream was confused and very scared for his friend, because of the negative emotions he was in a Coma! What was he going to do?! What if Ink lost his memory! Oh, wait... Ink already loses his memories everyday.

Nightmare looked shocked at the heart, Ink wasn't supposed to have a soul. What's happening? Nightmare quickly broke his thoughts and looked at Dream, he was panicking again.

Nightmare only sighs, "You know I can absorb the negativity, right?"

Dream stopped, he was so dumb! He forgot that Nightmare, his brother, is the literal God of Negativity! Dream smiles warmly at Nightmare with happiness and relief and sheepishly said, "No.. I forgot you were the God of Negativity for a bit.."

Nightmare facepalms and calls Dream an idiot before lightly touching the pale and fragile soul, taking small bits of the negativity that was drowning it, away.

While Nightmare was doing that, Ink's scrunched face relaxed and his tenseness disappeared. Nightmare was still amazed that Ink somehow got a soul though. Did seeing Error and your mistakes cause you to create a soul making you feel intense guilt?

A clever theory, but still a simple one. Perhaps it was right, Nightmare was only wrong a few times, but he knew better than to judge it with nothing but this scene.

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When Nightmare screamed at them to heal Error they all scrambled up to Error. Horror scavenged around his pockets to see if he had any Monster Candy, while Dust tried his best with the little healing magic he learned.

Killer looked away, he still couldn't bear to see Error's scars. If he looked even closer he'd see more scars, but he was fine with seeing Error from three feet apart.

Cross and Chara gathered their determination to try and help Error, Error was nice to them, so of course, they'd help. Cross's hands glowed a weird red and tried to help out Dust.

"Got it!" Horror exclaims, which breaks Dust and Cross's Concentration.

They glared at him, it wasn't a situation to yell childishly. Horror noticed them and shriveled up a little, before fumbling with his hands, "I-I found two Monster Candies!"

Dust sighed, he couldn't stay mad at Horror for finding Monster food. Cross only nods and smiles before continuing his concentration.

Error's cracks weren't healing, but the blood and marrow stopped leaking out, which was a good sign. Hopefully, with the Monster Candies, it will help with some of his Scars.

Horror unwraps one and pops it into Error's mouth. Error almost choked on it but noticed it was only candy, so he swallowed the sweet treat.

The magic and warmth spread around his body, but his magic almost rejects it. It was a good thing the Monster Candy didn't have a lot of magic in it.

Considering that Horror's AU was starved, yeah, everyone can believe that.

The Warmth made his bones stronger, and Cross noticed that some pieces that he had never seen were actually on him. More fragments were made on Error. That was good, that means that those parts can be attached and healed onto Error.

Horror unwraps the second one before a cough interrupts them. It was Blue, he looked at Horror with a sad smile, before giving him some Monster Candies that he took before coming here.

Horror smiles at him with an innocent look and picks the candies up before popping another candy in Error's mouth.

Around them were the sanses, they were staring at the gang with a weird expression. When they saw Horror smile innocently at Blue it shocked them, they didn't know Horror could do that. Honestly, Horror scares the crap out of them.

Blue sighs at the first mistake they made, they forgot to open the act box and check his soul and stats, but he can understand since there were other people here.

"Uh... I'm going to check his soul." Blue says softly.

The gang tensed up at the words check and soul, but they looked at Error to Blue and thought it was worth it.

They nodded, Dust spoke up forming a sharp deformed bone, "Yeah.. but show them something you aren't supposed to, and friend or foe, we're Dusting you!"

Blue looked at Dust with a deadpan expression from the pun, before going up to Error and checking Error's hp stats. Doing so showed his soul, and everyone who could see it visibly gasped or looked in shock at the state it was in.

Blue looked at it with queasy eyes, it wasn't the first time Error showed Blue his soul, but the queasiness wouldn't disappear every time he saw the soul.

Blue looked at the textbox.

*Error! Sans

*The ?????? God of Destruction and ??????

*LV: ???????

*DF: ???????

*AT: ???????

*HP: 0.000000000000000001

*He is having a flashback, the cause is of the chatter and nonexistent personal bubble.

*He is healing for once, make it count.

+0.1% HP boost

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Yay double chapters today. only for today to make up with the info las chapter, so this will only happen this time.

Also, imagine the chapter name saying it in a cheerful voice not too loud though just enough to sound sarcastic but not sarcastic.

And Sorry for the short wait! I was at the mall for quite some time.

Hope you had fun reading this!!

Published 90/26/20

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