A Mistake's Beginning [Moved to AO3]

Chapter 14: Dream's Betrayal

Credited to Harrish6, who's account is found on ao3, FanFiction. Net, And Wattpad. I do not know if they are on quotev, but I've found them on those platforms.

They're still continuing their stories, and everyone credits them for the inspiration of creating the forced god part of the undertale fandom.

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After these moments and probably the longer half of an hour of the Deities' time, Fate decided it was time for them to disappear. She clapped her hands and had told everyone this. Destiny had pouted but the rest had nodded, they had enough time here.

Destiny waved her hands to everyone as a goodbye as she disappeared in a shimmer of gold along with everyone else but with the colors they represented. Error cheerfully waves a bit, but stops. Fate had let go of her strings, letting everyone move. Error was scared, what would they do now that the deities were gone, would they attack again or would they see... The error of their ways.

Error snorted at the thought pun, clearly distracted, he brought his arms up, hugging himself as he did so. Ink, notices Error snorting and he walks near.

Ink opened his mouth and questioned him, "Uhh, Error.. Uhm... Are you ok?"

Error jumps, from how close Ink was, he started to glitch badly. Error couldn't use his strings anymore so he was free but more useless, without a clue on who Ink was he shrieked, "GeT aWAy fRoM mEeEee!"

Blinded from the glitches didn't help and he started grasping for his eyes in habit. Trying to wring out the strings was painful but he always used them, so it never hurted for a long time. He was getting nervous and scared, completely forgetting about Fate taking away his strings, he screams as he knew Ink was nearby somewhere.

He tried too hard and soon he started bleeding from his eye sockets, Ink looked in shock, and tried to go near Error and stop him from doing that, but Nightmare grabbed Ink with a tentacle.

"You have done too much damage, Error is still immortal so this is nothing to worry about." Nightmare said chillingly.

Ink narrowed his eyes and frowned, but he couldn't talk as if he did he would be calling himself a hypocrite. And so, they watched Error shrieking while everyone stared in a scared trance. Dream wanted to do something, but the look on Nightmare was chilling for him.

Nightmare's face looked nothing but nonchalant as if Error does this on a daily basis. Dream looked at Error and back at Nightmare and he stayed there standing on the snow. After the Deities stopped by, Dream had never felt disgusted before, but he wasn't disgusted by anyone, no, not even at Error, he was disgusted at himself. He started thinking and his face turned that of into a haunted one. He stared at nothing but the snow in front of him and just looked haunted.

His star like eyes disappeared and his eye sockets looked like an endless void, his face showing the same trait.

Fate looks down, she didn't leave, exactly, like her friends, they were visiting their Multiverses so they're technically just chilling in her room... passed out... looking like they just did drugs and had an overdose--

Fate shakes her chaotic thoughts away and tries to think rationally again. Dream looked very... scary. Welp, looks like Fate will have to do something, so she used some of her creator writing skills so that Dream will think of what fate wants him to think.

A thought hit Dream's head and a blink brought back his eyes with confusion etching his face, what if Dream used his positive arrows to give Error.. Happiness? Would it work this way?

Dream didn't want to do this and strayed away from the thought, but Fate had different plans, she wrapped her blue strings like a puppet on Dream. Dream panicked and looked at Error, again forgetting that these are not Error's blue strings.

But when he saw that Error was scratching his eyes looking fearful, that's when it hit him, Fate took away his strings showing him that he is now free. He once again looked at the strings who are invisible to everyone but him and he grew scared, Fate must have given him that thought, didn't she.

Dream tried to struggle, his panic growing every second. Nightmare had felt some of these emotions but when he felt the emotions grow stronger he turned to Dream who was a bit far from him, Ink and Error.

Dream was only standing there, but his face looked panicked. Dream had tried to struggle looking uncomfortable and squirming, but Fate's strings didn't let go.

Once Dream accepted he couldn't do anything Fate's strings moved to Dreams staff which turned into his prized bow, that's when he actually connected those thoughts together, he then started to try harder, he tried to squirm out of the strings, but like a puppeteer, they wouldn't let go.

Fate hummed a thought, perhaps she'll let Nightmare see it after Dreams calls for help.

Nightmare looked at Dream in a bit of anger, the anger clouded his control of negativity. He didn't feel Dream's panic, and the negative aura grew bigger than the positivity around Dream did.

Ink looked at Nightmare with a look of fear, his soul not accustomed to this yet, "N-Nightmare?"

The small calling brought Nightmare from his stupor, he looked at Ink and glared, "What?"

"Are you.. O-Ok?" Ink looked at Nightmare with a look of extra LV.

Nightmare scoffed at the disgraceful look, "I'm fine.."

Then Nightmare looked at Dream leading Ink's eyes over there, "But I doubt he is."

Ink gasped at what Dream was doing, "Dream! What are you doing?!"

"I-Ink.." Dream's eyes looked at Ink with panic, and then he noticed his brother next to him, "Br-Brother... H-Help me.."

Nightmare looked confused, but anger started to crowd him again. That was until Fate's Strings showed themselves to Nightmare. This shocked Nightmare out of his Anger and he looked at Error, once again forgetting that he doesn't have his strings anymore. Nightmare smacked his face, and looked at Dream and the strings. This was Fate doing of course, how could he forget their interactions.

The Deities have the power to do whatever, so all of this could just be an act to gain more entertainment.

Dream's eyes started to water and he gasped out before screaming, "NO STOP!"

Nightmare blinked, his blurred eyes focusing on Dream again, this time Dream had aimed his bow at Error's panicked body, an arrow started forming. Nightmare tried to run forward but then Fate's strings wrung him up as well.

Nightmare growled and pushed his tendrils out to try and stop Dream from releasing the shot, but once again Fate grabbed his Tentacles, Nightmare looked like he was floating from mid-air, and the sanses nearby had already cleared the area around Nightmare from the abrupt look of attack.

"Fate! You Baker!" Nightmare screamed for all to hear, "STOP!"

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Published 10/05/20

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