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McQueeney
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Long Time Crush
by kaychwe
Hello dear. For me, your story is nice even though taliwas iyong genre n'ya. This is not an Adventure, it's Teen-Fic, siguro ganito ang masasabi ko dahil baka wala pa ito sa kalagitnaan ng kwento mo. Baka sa una lang Teen-Fic tapos magiging Adventure sa ending. But, I like your blurb.. Iniwanan mo kaming mambabasa mo ng tanong, which is very effective kung gagawa ka ng kwento lalo na kung simula. Like macoconfuse mo ang mambabasa mo, if ganito o ganyan ba iyong mangyayare. Very nice, I like that. About technicalities, may mga konting errors like, sa grammar and spelling.. Minsan nababalitaktad yung letter or nagkukulang. As of now, wala akong masabi dahil maganda ang story nina Jonathan and Erica and sana sila ang magkatuluyan kahit magkaiba ang estado nila sa buhay. Good job and Congratulations!
Lilith: The First Eve
whosttwo
Almost perfect. The blurb, cover and content even the narration. Natatawa lang ako sa ugali ng mga Archangel, makukulit lalo si Archangel Gabriel. Believe it has potential! Keep it up, you wrote a great story. Good job and Congratulations!
Captured the Golden Swan
by eanaofthedawn
Brief and concise, the way ka mag bitaw ng mga lines halatang pinag isipang mabuti. Hindi ko na napansin kung may mga typos dahil nag enjoy ako sa pagbabasa dahil may nakuha akong new knowledge. Over all, is well said. Good job and Congratulations!
Cliché
by Namjal
Hello dear. For me base sa cover and blurb, hinahanap ko yung connection nila sa isat isa pero hindi ko magets kung tugma pa iyong cover mo sa blurb pero its okay kasi mas mainam pa rin kung mas lalong catchy iyong cover para mas lalong maconvience mo o ma attract 'yong mga readers but anyway.. Gusto ko iyong napagsama mo sa isang libro ang tatlong genre. May time lang na naguguluhan ako, I'm not sure, siguro sa mga chosen words mo. So far maganda ang akda mo. Gusto ko the way you describing the place, raramdaman mo yung presence. And about the technicalities, ayon na nga, minsan lang talaga may time na nakalilito but still Fighting! No pressure. Good job and Congratulations!
Conundrum Thrill
Arvegres
Na speechless ako. Madami na rin naman akong nabasang story pero sobra akong namangha sa story mo. Di ko na napansin kung may mga errors, but over all it has potential. Keep up the good work author. Good job and Congratulations!
The Secret from the darkness
by Pandamonium_Writes
Concise! I love the way you narrate the story, may mga kakaunting typos and errors but it's almost perfect, may ibubuga talaga ang story mo. Napaka catchy lalo na dahil sa topic na napili mo. Galing! The cover and blurb are both good. Keep it up, alam kong may igagaling kapa. Good job and Congratulations!
Slayer: Blindly Exalted
by Unrcgnzd
The plot is really good. How you narrate all the scenes are well-exhibited. Tamang-tama lamang ang pangyayari. Although there are parts na parang taliwas sa kuwento, 'di ba si Hark ay galing sa Nars? And he was talking chingchong yet noong nag POV siya ay may parte na nahahalo ang english at filipino. Okay lang naman iyon sa'kin pero mas mabuti kung fluent o filipino nalang talaga ang gamitin mo. Anyways, kakaunti lang ang nakita kong typos and stuff. Nakakaaliw ang story mo. From the start really hooks up. Napakaraming tanong and that gibing curiosity to your readers are great. Good job and Congratulations!
The Seven Guardians
by deepthinker1D
Hi dear, I really love you're story from the start up to ending. Sobra akong na hooked! Sobrang ganda ng ending, I salute you author. Hindi ko aakalaing ganoon iyong magiging ending. Kasi at first hindi ko talaga alam kong tatapusin ko ba iyong story kasi parang di ko gusto iyong first chapter pero noong nasa kalagitnaan na ako, I can't stop reading, siguro kung hindi ako pinatapos 'yong story sobrang manghihinayang ako. Sobrang wow. We all know that your chosen genre is challenging but you give justice for that. All in all perfect, alam kong madami kapang matututunan at maipapublish. Keep up the good work. Good job and Congratulations!
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