This book is reviewed by amarachi_doris. I am gonna start from the title
The title is a unique one,it fits the book. And a quick research shows it is not common.
Cover:I feel the cover is nice, but I feel it is a little dull. It's not bad but you could get a better cover that fits the book more from our graphic shop.
Characters: I will start with your main character, at first I thought it was a five year old girl cause of the way he was speaking. A guy doesn't speak that way. I only read the first chapter and I felt like sleeping.
Description: your description is nice, but not the best. I feel it is a little short. I think it doesn't attract readers. All in all, I feel your blurb is boring.
Dialogue: the dialogue between the main character and his dad was weird. I get his father is the villain but the way a grown man talks to his father isn't like this.
Grammar& Punctuation:Your grammar was good, I didn't spot a mistake. So good job
Hook: Your book didn't make me want to read more. You didn't try to make your reader want more.
Pacing:I am gonna go straight to the point, it is too slow. I feel that you need to fasten it, but not too fast.
Readers enjoyment: I didn't enjoy your book at all. Not too offend you but I found it boring
Sorry if I offended you with this review. Hope you enjoyed it
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