The First Case

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It's your first day at the BAU hello, I'm Aaron Hotchner head of the BAU. calls from not far behind you it kind of startle you you get goosebumps oh! Hi, I'm (y/n) nice to meet you. So as you and Hotch head into the elevator he asks you about your family, and you remember you just got engaged to your fiance last month, so you tell him and then you ask about his family and he doesn't really say anything but then he says it's really just me and my son jack. Oh you say and then it goes quiet again. The bell to the elevator dings and you step off and Jj is standing there with a new case then she sees you oh hello, i'm Jennifer Jearu but you can call me Jj, so you guys are walking into the round table room hello very one this is (y/n) hey beautiful in Derek says a voice in the middle of the room as he stands to shake your hand Penlope interrupts, Hi i'm Penelope Garcia, tech analysis you call me and i can't find all the info so we allsit down and then someone walks in sorry i'm late everyone sh looks at me hey i'm Emily Prentiss and we continue on its a serial murder penlope puts the picture up on the big screen "they were humg bay their feet by a red sil sheet with devil horns and the fork through their hand in witcha valley" saitianist? Derek questions. I don't know but Reid will meet us at the police station wheels up in 30. 

On the jet you all sit down and go over the case you start to feel overwhelmed though the hanging people aspect brings up the wrong memories of you when you were nine and saw your dad's dead body hanging from the ceiling. So it's probably a male in his late twenties early thirties why hang them why would he take the risk of witness, you say he probably has a van to take them back Hotch calls Penelope Garcia look at all companies with vans Derek says it's probably a company like roofers any thing that includes ladders, roofers movers anything like that, okay! Over and out says Garcia. (y/n) and Morgan go to the station Emily and Rossi go to the scene and Jjcome with me to talk with the families.

Me and Morgan get to the station and we see Reid with his nose in like five books about satanism. Heyyy pretty boy this is (y/n) his beautiful brown is hard to look away from and the way his hair flows perfectly with the air conditioning. oh hello I he tries to shake my hand and then he starts telling us that the reason the unsub is hanging upside down is because it represents victims to go to hell like sacrifices? I say yeah so he sees Lucifer more commonly known as the devil. So if he's dumping the bodies every three days then is he dumping and picking up in thesaurus night. Most likely says a man's voice, hi I'm chief sterling im head of the police force here, and you are? Hi I'm (y/n) and this is agent Derek Morgan. Well I left L.A. to get away from this mess but I guess it just followed here these damn people. Okay so we know he's a satanist but there's no tourcher right, well we don't know Morgan says let's go to the morg and see. 

We get into the sedan and Derek is on the phone with Hotch to tell him the new information that we had just learned. We get to the morgue and we see the bodies. 3 of them each have ligration marks on their wrists and ankles. We ask the doctor for some tox screens and there's loads of melatonin in their systems. The females all have slit wrists pre mortum but no signs of sexual assault. I get a call from Hotch that we're going to give the profile. We get to the staiun and I look and see jj guiding the press to a conference room, we all head in and we start to give the prof

The profile this unsub,... unsub? Someone in the press said. Unknown subject I correct then Spencer looks at me and winks and I got those butterflies again, Hotch stars again: This unsub is in his early twenties early thirties he is an extream sadist he is one of those people that if you say God is the best he will put up an extream fight for the devil being high power so if you know any one or have any information please call this hotline.

A few hours later the hotline phone rings jj calls Garcia " Garcia, record this call and track it" already on it love Garcia says. Hello , this is Aaron Hotchner with the FBI. How can i help- i don't need your "help" Aaron. The voice on the other line says grogley, i need to give you an offer and what is that says Aaron in a calm voice. My offer is: i will stop killing people..... If you give me one of your agents. I cant do tha- i whisper over to Hotch " ill do it" no he nodded. Meet me  at the park on 67th street at 9:30 tonight  says the voice on the other end. Well see.. Hotch says. Are we going, said the chief? Of course we are, Hotch says walking off.

Now nine 9:00 sharp. It's dark now, but we stare to pile into our sedans and law enforcement starts to get into their cars and we start driving. Me and Spencer are in the front and Morgan and Hotch are in front, I can feel that yaknow feel what he says, i can fee; you looking at me actually..  The biological phenomenon is known as "gaze detection" or "gaze perception." Neurological studies have found that the brain cells that initiate this response are very precise. If someone turns their gaze off of you by turning just a few degrees to their left or right, that eerie feeling quickly fades. Huh and you just know this yes actually. Well doesn't explain why you were looking at me. Oh i wasn't trying to offend yo- you didn't offend me i'm just merely asking a question. Oh well i was looking at you because well your carotid says your not nervous but this is your first case so you should definitely be nervous so there's nothing to be nervous about therefore i'm not nervous.

We get to the park and we all turn off our lights. As we pull up, He calls Aaron hello were here. Well then I assume you have my agent. We are all out of the car now and Aaron looks at me and winks, yes we do and you have all of your hostages why yes that wouldn't be fair if I didn't. As i walk up every one turns on their lights we see him and all of the hostages as i walk up i realize that the hostages look awfully weird and then i put it together they are mannequins!! So i start to run back yelling "their fake!!" but then i feel 2 sharp pains on my back i can tell one of them is a bullet but what is the other??

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