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CRITERIA:
Content - 40
Writing Authenticity - 20
Book Cover - 10
Title - 5
Blurb - 10
Technicalities - 15
The Devil's Nyfi by charlenemarila
Content - 30
Writing Authenticity - 16
Book Cover - 8
Title - 5
Blurb - 7
Technicalities - 14
Total - 80
Feedback:
Nagandahan ako sa title mo, pero no'ng nabasa ko 'yong blurb... Parang alam ko na agad kung ano 'yong mangyayari. And true enough, your story is kinda predictable. Nandoon 'yong Fantasy genre which is 'yong "kingdom" part, but the Romance? Wala akong nabasa. I'm also actually looking for some twist at the end, but it turned out na naging bitin siya. That's why I gave you a lower grade for the content. Siguro mas maganda kung tinuloy mo pa, atleast may mailalagay kang Romance part doon. For the technicalities naman, minimal errors lang naman like capitalization and some use of words. 'Yon lang, keep on writing and God bless!
Eclipse by Vhionne
Content - 35
Writing Authenticity - 16
Book Cover - 9
Title - 4
Blurb - 9
Technicalities - 12
Total - 85
Feedback:
I liked how you started the story... Pero habang binabasa ko siya, the flow and concept of the story gives me a "Kwentong Pambata" vibes. No offense, but sa dami na rin kasi ng nabasa ko. But overall, ang ganda ng pagkaka-deliver ng lines. I definitely saw the Fantasy-Romance in it, pati na 'yong lessons. For the technicalities naman... Wala namang grammar inaccuracies, lacking of punctuations lang. 'Yon lang, keep on writing and God bless!
Red String's Other End by isko_tisoy
Content - 37
Writing Authenticity - 18
Book Cover - 10
Title - 4
Blurb - 10
Technicalities - 15
Total - 94
Feedback:
Your title and blurb got my curiosity! And I didn't expect na in English language siya. You have a great choice of words and wala akong napunang errors, that's why I gave you a perfect score for technicalities. I've read many stories about fate, and I can say that this one's different. 'Yon lang, keep on writing and God bless! Congratulations!
Last Sob of the Stupid Katipunero by AuschwitzBlitzkrieg
Content - 38
Writint Authenticity - 19
Book Cover - 9
Title - 5
Blurb - 10
Technicalities - 14
Total - 95
Feedback:
First of all, kudos to you for trying these different genres. Actually I find it hard, but you still managed to include Humor by the main's character stupidity. Napatawa mo ako roon, kahit doon sa mga kuwento ni Fely kay Martin. Napansin ko lang din na minsan, nakakalimutan mong maglagay ng punctuations. And the ending!!! 'Di ko talaga ine-expect na magiging tragic siya. But overall, and ganda ng story mo! Keep on writing and God bless! Congratulations!
Drowned to His Abode by iluvY00ngi
Content - 40
Writing Authenticity - 18
Book Cover - 10
Title - 5
Blurb - 10
Technicalities - 15
Total - 98
Feedback:
Title and blurb pa lang, nakaka-curious na! And I liked how you make every sentence descriptive, talagang damang-dama mo. I definitely saw the Fantasy-Romance genre in it. Sa technicalities naman, wala naman akong napansing errors and such. And the ending!!! (I almost swear tbh hahaha) Ang galing lang how you ended it! 'Yon lang, keep on writing and God bless! Congratulations!
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1ST PLACE: iluvY00ngi - Drowned by His Abode
2ND PLACE: AuschwitzBlitzkrieg - Last Sob of The Stupid Katipunero
3RD PLACE: isko_tisoy - Red String's Other End
Participants:
charlenemarila
Vhionne
Note:
Hindi ko po sure, pero baka po mamaya, saturday, or sunday po ako magbibigay ng prizes. Maraming salamat po sa pagsali. God Bless
