Making A Difference
Written by : TheOG_avenger
Judge : PeherKothari
Title-7/10
Blurb-8/10
Cover - 6/10
Plot- 8/10
Character development- 6/10
Grammar-7/10
Flow- 8/10
Dialogue/Expression- 9/10
Creativity/originality-9/10
Overall - 6/10
Total- 74/100
The start was pretty well. Then Shaheer's entry, as many and I expected him, he turned completely different.
Then the movie, it was written well. Being a marvel I could understand and the way you wrote, even if I wasn't a Marvel freak I would have understood it. That's good.
Coming to the advances the couple are making towards each other, didn't it happen too fast? Like there was no small gestures, no character development occurred. A slower pace would have been better.
Overall, it was fun reading the book!
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