Aati ho toh baarish lete aana : @r1ddh115

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Aati ho toh baarish lete aana

Written by : r1ddh115

Judge : PeherKothari

Title-7/10
Blurb-6/10
Cover - 7/10
Plot- 7/10
Character development- 6/10
Grammar-5/10
Flow-7 /10
Dialogue/Expression- 2/10
Creativity/originality-7/10
Overall - 6/10

Total- 60/100

The start was good but too fast. Like everything happened so quickly, as if telling a summary. No detailed description, no time for things to reap.

Secondly, Hindi dialogues again. It was mentioned in rules, book must be in English with only a little in Hindi. I'm sorry dear, but Hindi isn't my mother tongue nor did I study it much in school. Though I understand much, it is very difficult for me. You can probably see, points are deducted in that area.

Even points are deducted in grammar because the whole book was in Hindi only, there was no English anywhere.

Due to this I couldn't enjoy the book much.