Plumanunulat One Shot Competition (Open)

Best Pick in Teen Fiction

After an eternity, char. I am really sorry kung natagalan ang pagrelease ng scores but this is it!

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Feral Bonds by gril18
Average: 91

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I like the blurb, it is complete and short. The total too is witty. The cover seems plain but good enough. What I like the most is your narration. I admire how you narrate everything in Filipino only. There are minimal errors and that can be fixed. With the plot, I actually find it resonating to our society. This teenfic is different as it is not the typical student teenfic. However, I am finding more to the plot. I am finding a twist. Comparing to other entries I've read, they have a twist making yours less impactful. But overall, it is not stressful to read as there are minimal errors. Great job on this one, congratulations!

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Impaired Hearts by typicalcazandra
Average: 91

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I love your story. Amongst all the entries, you gave me that plot I am looking for. The impact got me and it resonates the society as this issue is common. There are life lessons that everything happens for a reason and your characters found theirs. They saved each other, and I just got really emotional. I have nothing to say for the technicalities because it is smoothly written. However, the title is somewhat cliche, I was expecting a romance but you gave me different, add points to that. The book cover may be aesthetic but it should be related to the story. Thr blurb is short and common, try adding more. I also commend you for using English that has no to minimal grammatical errors. You gave me less headache. Other than that, congratulations!

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When Time Dilate by kazumeh_17
Average: 91.5

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I have lots of questions in mind after I read the story. I love your book cover and title. It is intriguing, it made me curious. Blurb is almost perfect, I suggest you remove "Question is..." For the plot, why didn't the father told his wife and child at once? Daughter and father became lovers without daughter knowing it and the father is aware. I just see this as a loophole. The law of relativity is fascinating and intriguing to what plot you would bring.

Since I love science, I love how the story revolves around that. But then again, there are questions lingering in my mind. I already guessed the ending, but I think it is unexpected to some. Your story is commendable, congratulations!

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You and Me and the Karaoke by Alegny
Average: 92

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Starting off with the title, it is good in a way that it connects to the context. However, it does not really catch my attention. Same goes with the blurb. I would also like to commend you for creating this. It started all good with the problems faced by the character. It really reflects reality of college life. One thing that I am finding is the twist. I'm just not contented and I am finding more. You pulled it off though in the narration and technicalities. It's very smooth and narrated well, congratulations author!

Congratulations! Just PM me to get your badges and certificates though mabagal akong magrespond kasi ginawa ko ulit dahil nasa isang cp ko yung mga certs and badges, sira na. Padayon!