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First, we are going to thank our wonderful judges, who are amazing. I truly encourage you to continue to follow your judges as they put in a lot of work and deserve it.

Second, we are posting everyone's scores here. That way, everyone can see what they got. If you do not want your score here, please tell me, and I will take it down for you. This was just a way for everyone to have it, and not have to ask judges or hosts.

Judged by djgraves01

Title: Gabriel
Author: heraharker

Title: 8/10
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 2/5
Plot: 14/25
Character Development: 17/20
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/25
Interesting?: 5/5
Original?: 5/5
Total: 76/100
Honest Review: Not a fan of the whole triangle love story. (Jane The Virgin was my last one and it broke me.) That being said you still have a badass story, I was expecting not to like it, from the blurb, but it actually drew in my attention really well. I hope you keep writing.

Title: Bloodlines
Author: Elven_minstrel

Title: 7/10
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Plot: 25/25
Character Development: 20/20
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/25
Interesting?: 5/5
Original?: 5/5
Total: 92/100
Honest Review: I fucking loved your story from the blurb alone! The chapters were just added bonus. I have never seen a story like this before, I didn't expect to love your story as fast, as I did. I am mean when it comes to reviews and your story has melted my heart, never stop writing.

Title: Broken Silence
Author: Wait_I_Am_Belladonna

Title: 10/10
Cover: 0/5
Blurb: 0/5
Plot: 15/25
Character Development: 17/20
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/25
Interesting?: 4/5
Original?: 5/5
Total: 71/100
Honest Review: I can see where you are going with your story, but your appearance throws everyone off. A good story also has a good cover, title, and blurb and yours are not great. I would first finish the story find some great lines and build a blurb from that. Work on your cover, I don't know what else to say besides that. Your cover is simple and cute but too simple. It will get passed over.

Title: Avenging Antonio
Author: Bloomfalls

Title: 5/10
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
Plot: 20/25
Character Development: 14/20
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/25
Interesting?: 5/5
Original?: 5/5
Total: 77/100
Honest Review: Your blurb starts off amazing but you also tell everything. I know why she is being badass, I know why Cole wants to know more about Davina. I get blurbs are exposed to be a look into the story, but this made me feel like I walked in my grandma naked, I saw everything. That doesn't mean your book wasn't interesting, I loved it. I will be adding it to my personal library for when you finish. I would have just liked to learn about the characters through their actions in the book.

Title: Aspiring Secrets
Author: Anga_Boba_Tea

Title: 10/10
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 2/5
Plot: 14/25
Character Development: 14/20
Grammar/Vocabulary: 20/25
Interesting?: 5/5
Original?: 5/5
Total: 73/100
Honest Review: I don't like your cover, but I don't hate it either. I would recommend something new if you can find better than that. Your plot flips so fucking fast! Melissa seems normal and but she is actually living the life of Agent Cody Banks. (Please don't be young and don't know that movie!) I enjoyed your story a lot more than I thought I would your blurb gave away way to much in my opinion, but your story still has way more to give, that you forget what the blurb said.

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