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Judged by Pearl1l
Title: Revival
Author: LizzzzzzzzzSTitle: 7
Cover: 3
Blurb: 4
Plot: 23
Character Development: 17
Grammar/ Vocabulary: 20
Interesting: 5
Original: 5
Total: 84
Honest review:It's an interesting title and well-made cover, but the picture is a little bit out of alignment with the thumbnail. For those who aren't fans or readers of Harry Styles fan-fiction, spelling it out in the title can help you diversify the readers. The blurb piqued my interest and added an element of mystery. But I feel like there's a missed opportunity at the beginning because you have used a POV-style; there could have been detailed insights into the character's psyche as they face the situations you have described. I was confused about how and when Harry got over his destructive streak or when Jane and Harry fell for each other. A little insight would have helped me know more about that. However, as the story developed, it became more interesting. Your style of writing is conversational and simple. At times, I felt that sentences were crowded and the formatting of the paragraphs was inconsistent. The use of ellipsis and repeating letters in a word to add emphasis can be distracting. Overall, I think the storyline is promising. I could only get to Chapter 8 for this review, but if I get time, I will come back and read more.Title: Scarlett
Author: zoyalorraineTitle: 8
Cover: 3
Blurb: 5
Plot: 23
Character Development: 16
Grammar/ Vocabulary: 23
Interesting: 4
Original: 5
Total: 87
Honest review:When I looked at the cover, it was not obvious that this is a Harry Potter fiction, with a fictional character in Draco Malfoy's world, but the blurb was perfect as an introduction to the story. I could immediately tell that this book is written in a POV style. While reading the book, I felt that the in-text images were distracting, but it seems to be a trend on Wattpad. I like that you chose to tell the story in simple words and sentence structure. You have done a great job in describing the scenes and the dialogs were crisp and on-point. I was not left wondering where a scene took place or its importance in the story. My only issue could be with some of the facts about the Wizarding World. Being a Harry Potter fan, I noticed, for example, 'potions' was spelled as 'portions', or classes for the students in the same house weren't held together. Overall, it's a great and original read for me. I would suggest increasing the lengths of each of your chapters; as a reader, I had to read more than a handful before I could sense the plot of the story. But I would definitely recommend it to anyone who likes to read HP fiction.
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Scarlet Awards 2020 | Closed
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