Chapter 1 - First Impressions

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Once approaching the city, I started to look around

This city, Pentagram City, looked just like any other city in real life, but Hellish version, of course

There were demons

Lots of demons

There were those, who were looking at me with interest, some didn't really cared and some wanted to try to steal something from me

But they ended up being hurt: broken leg, arm, or even being hit in the stomach by a guitar, which, surprisingly, had a mind of it's own

I entered one bar

And asked bartender, who's the ruler here

Bartender: Ah, I see you're new here, if asking that - he calmly answered back - Our ruler is Lucifer Magne, he's the best King. He even has a wife, Lilith Magne. Man, that woman is so pretty... - he's gone into his own fantasy world for a while - Every demon loves her - he came back to reality and started to talk normally again - But they have a daughter, the next heir to the throne, Charlotte Magne, who prefers to be called Charlie. And you know what's the funniest thing is? - he asked me, but I just had a confused look on my face and shrugged my shoulders - She opened an hotel, which, as she thinks, can redeem us demons! - he started to laugh, plus other demons started to do the same, also commenting, who she truly is, like "And she calls herself a Princess of Hell!" or "There's no way anyone will want to be redeemed at all" - Man, how stupid of her!

Zach: "started to walk away, not even thanking the bartender"

Bartender then stopped me asking:

Bartender: Don't fucking tell me you're going in there to try to be redeemed

I want actually to be redeemed, but I have some killing unfinished business in the real world, so I just answered:

Zach: Yes, I'm going there. Want to check that Hotel. I'll say nothing more - and with that I left the bar

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I was approaching a big building, which definitely was an Hotel

I was approaching a big building, which definitely was an Hotel

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Approaching the main entrance, I started knocking

After some seconds the doors were opened and I was greeted by a young blonde girl, who is wearing a black bow tie, a white shirt underneath her froly pink colored tuxedo jacket, paired with aubergine colored trousers with stripes at the end of the legs in the same color as her jacket, long black suspenders, and black and white spectator shoes

After some seconds the doors were opened and I was greeted by a young blonde girl, who is wearing a black bow tie, a white shirt underneath her froly pink colored tuxedo jacket, paired with aubergine colored trousers with stripes at the end of the...

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There was a silence for some seconds, which I ruined:

Zach: I'm really sorry, if I'm disturbing you, but I assume you're Charlotte Magne?

She was silent for some seconds, but answered back:

Charlie: Yes, I'm her, but friends call me Charlie. And you are?

Zach: Oh, where my manners! Zach is my name. And I'm new here in Hell.

She let me enter inside, but only I entered, I was greeted by a gray girl, who had spear in her hands and that spear was almost touching my neck

She was having an X instead of her left eye, her hair is white, she was wearing a pastel goth-like outfit; her mini dress is white with light-navy blue X's on the chest, a frill at the bottom, and a belt

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She was having an X instead of her left eye, her hair is white, she was wearing a pastel goth-like outfit; her mini dress is white with light-navy blue X's on the chest, a frill at the bottom, and a belt

???: Don't you dare to even move! I don't know why you're here, who are you, or what you want, I will NOT let you harm anyone here!

Charlie: Vaggie, he's new! - she exclaimed, saying the girl's name, who was having spear in front of my neck - I'm sure he can tell us how he got here

Zach: "thinking" - So that girl's name is Vaggie? Cute name

Then we heard someone coming towards our position:

???: What's all the noise, Charlie, my dear? - the one, who was asking, was having a voice of a radio - And who's this young fellow?

The demon, who approached us, was in all red, his hair had a look of a deer, he had a sentient vintage style microphone in his right hand

The demon, who approached us, was in all red, his hair had a look of a deer, he had a sentient vintage style microphone in his right hand

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Now just looking at him he reminded me of someone I knew from when I was back on Earth... Wait a minute!

Zach: Alastor? Is that really you?

His eyes widened up

Alastor: Zach? Am I dreaming? Tell me it's a dream!

Zach: "became human" - It's not a dream, my friend!

Seeing me transforming into human from the demon, definitely shocked Vaggie and Charlie

We hugged each other

Alastor: "laughs" It's been a while since we saw each other, my friend

Zach: It surely was

Charlie: Um... Don't want to be rude by ruining this... Reunion of yours, but how can you know each other? - she was trying to understand, what's going on here - And how is it possible that your friend is able to transform from demon to human, Al? Only demons appear here in Hell

Alastor: Well, my dear, Zach isn't some ordinary human. He is the one, who became my friend back when I was still alive. And about what you're asking after seeing him transforming from demon to human... We better tell you how it started from the very beginning

TO BE CONTINUED...

A/N - I changed some things for the future of the story: Lucifer as female will NOT appear. Maybe Female Alastor (Aslt(-r)a) will appear as Alastor's sister, but it'll be in the future. Also yes, Zach, even being 22 years old, saw Alastor killed in the forest back in 1933, when he was 18-19, it was very first death Zach saw. About other characters - they'll be listening the story both Alastor and Zach will be narrating. Still Female Angel Dust and Husk are under question. Must I replace their originals with them? Or leave originals alone? Little bonus: should I try myself in Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sou Desu yo? (Problem Children Are Coming from Another World, Aren't They?) story?

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